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Kuch alfaaz zindagi ki ek maud par

Below I am just sharing two lines, there is not much to describe about them. These are just two lines, however if you read them then I expect you to say something about them or atleast what they convey to you!

Meri Zindagi par mera akhtiyaar naa raha,
Har mausam apne hi rang mein mujhe bighota gaya!

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April 19, 2011 at 12:17 pm 18 comments

जवान औरत-अनकही व्‍यथा

Same old thing, I do not write any more but sometimes I comes here with few odd creations, my experimentations…

Today, I am here with my attempt for a Hindi Poem. The topic of this POEM may be unheard to many. May be most of the people never noticed. Its about girls those just entered the adulthood or simply say, just grown up to girl from a child. I never saw any discussion about this topic ever, be it internet or real life. The topic is the situation of a young girl who is just grown up and find it hard to manage with those prying eyes which trying to look at her as if they are trying to unclad through eyes only.. They soon start to learn to be alert always and observing the people looking at them and trying to cover themselves though they are already well clothed.
Even if they don’t want they are still keeping note of how people are looking at them. Though with times it get normal but it is always there.
Not every person is looking at your with those x ray eyes but those few bad eyes makes them feel every one as suspect.

I am not sure how girl will take this poem I have tried to convey a problem which almost all girls face but they are never told that how to handle it. So I called it [b]Ankahi Vyatha[/b] ..

Jawaan aurat main bani,
yeh tan, yeh dheh kaya aisi nikhari..
Ki jaa ke kahan mein chippu,
Sankuchai si ki kaise teer drashti se bachun,
Mano mere tan nagn,
Kaise  swem ko surakshit mein rakhun?
Geedar samaan jaise mujhe woh ankhon se nochen..
Kya maine kiya koi apraadh..
Kyun mein iss apraadhbodh sang jeevan rachun?
Jo bachpan beeta laga mujhe
Ab nayi srashti mere angne pankh phelayegi..
Par maalum naa tha ki krur satya bhi saath layegi
Jaise lage ki har pal ek yudh ho
Aur nayan mere Yoddha evam
Har uss totalti drashti ke wo avruddh ho
Yeh kaisi vyatha ghir aayi
Abhi toh bachpan langha ..fir
Kyun ankahi duvidha maine payi
Kya mein Jawaan Aurat mein bani …
Aur mujhpe ye dandatmak karyewahi???????

Please give your views and specially girls are invited to say something about thought.
And in the last .. Please accept my apologies if I mis-represented any feeling or sentiments here. I will be more than happy if dear readers give their suggestion regarding this topic and explanation.

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August 15, 2008 at 8:58 pm 14 comments

Ambaar hai per ojhal ankhon se

About this poem :
Precious one ! Don’t want to add anything else.

Khamoshi gehri hai, kuch tadap raha hai,
Kahin saazish ye mujhpe hi na karde !!

Falak ye itna bara per mere liye nahin,
Inteha ho, yeh kahin mujhpe baarish naa karde !!

Kuwwat meri mere saath shiddat se per ab kahin,
Naraaz ho mujhse, dagha naa karde !!

Mere lavzon mein hai bharipan,
kahin ye aur dard naa bhardein !!

Behoshi sa aalam har pal, per hain saansein,
Bojhil ho toot jayen aur sharminda naa karden… !!

Lets divert the thoughts now and do you know that Yoindia is now Shayariadab ie. Yoindia Shayariadab

December 7, 2007 at 6:32 pm 8 comments

Mujhe hai ahsaas ki woh nahi hai!

Lately I was reading few poems from various poets, I tried to adopt that way and here is another poem.
I think its longest one I ever wrote. Do comment please.

Ahsaas hai mujhe ki woh ab nahi hai
Nahi hai wo mere sang nahi hai..
Door toh woh tha hee .. Magar ..
Magar ab woh hai hee nahi hai !!
Hai nahi koi umeed fir bhi .. kyun…
Nazar meri kuch dhoondh rahi hai ?.
Dhoondhna chahti hai kyun ab bhi woh..
uske lavzo me mera naam jo ab wahan nahi hai !
Wahan kuch surkh ho gaya hai ya..
Yahan kuch khalti kami hai ?
Khalti hai nazar mujhe meri .. Jo
Harr taraf teri hi nazar dhoondh rahi hai !
Mujhe ahsaas hai ki teri hansi mein ..
Hai chhupi meri hansi hai !
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August 11, 2007 at 10:12 pm 28 comments

Saza maine payi per gunegaar toh nahin..(dard pyar shayri)

Every other day I come up with few interesting lines and wanted to convert them into poems but I am failing in that again and again.

Kaise aage badhe hum jab
manzil hi hamari kahin peeche thahar gayi !
Gazur rahe thae jab uske paas sae..
na usne roka, naa usne awas di, sirf khamosh reh gayi !

The above one are those which I wrote few days ago, there are few others too but as new one comes, old ones lost there charm. Today I am thinking to complete above one ie. add something in them. So lets try: (more…)

August 4, 2007 at 7:52 pm 17 comments

Aaj ek Sms k liye Shayari hai

Not everytime you can write a big poem, sometimes small words are more than enough. Today I am with small one, a small one to fit in sms.

Baigane sab ho jate hain

Jab hum akele hote hain ..
Sab kitne begaine sae ho jate hain
Jo apne nahin thae woh bhi
Asaani sae ansu de jaate hain !

August 3, 2007 at 11:01 pm 9 comments

Kaun mere lavz chura le gaya

Lets discuss that when one can write a good poem?
–> When he is just sitting to write a poem as per the given need like an professional poet given an assignment.

or

–> When he is so much deep into emotion that all it turns in to words… ?
I feel, none of above can get best out of that poet. Let me tell how, for first case-when one has to write as per need, then can not write at it best because feelings are not really true in that & for second “when one is so much into emotions” then emotion get over the person so much, then I don’t think can really write effectively.
So when one can write at best ?
According to me when there is balanced mood ie. person is emotional and yes he has to write a poem then can give best out. How this works, well.. its that person starts writing as he has too, but as he gets into writing then emotions start taking over but can not take over whole as you were not really in emotional state.
So those were my views.
Today, I am thinking to try one, but I am not really in balanced mood, sometimes I find moving towards emotional side or sometimes I feel that I should write one.
Btw, thank you very much that you are still reading.

Mujhe kehna hai bohot, meri ek ankahi kahani hai,
Kaise mein kahu sab, mere lavz ab mujhse hi bemani hain !

Ek ek zarra jorkar maine socha ki kuch aaj kehdun..
Magar aisi zarre ki kafiyat jaise bair meri uski purani hai !

Fir poocha zindagi se tu kyun itni bebas khadi hai..
Ek qatra bahaya usne aansu,nahin bachi usme zindagi hai !

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July 23, 2007 at 5:58 pm 10 comments

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