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Kuch alfaaz zindagi ki ek maud par

Below I am just sharing two lines, there is not much to describe about them. These are just two lines, however if you read them then I expect you to say something about them or atleast what they convey to you!

Meri Zindagi par mera akhtiyaar naa raha,
Har mausam apne hi rang mein mujhe bighota gaya!

April 19, 2011 at 12:17 pm 18 comments

Shayari paagalpan hai, shayari fitoor hai !

Here is new work for you, it took me around one hour to make this poem. The idea behind this poem is very simple and which I used to see every where.

Its about a poet and his relation with poetry. For most of the people, poetry is just wastage of time, infact once I used to look over it as something without any purpose but when I myself went into it, I realize that its not easy it looks, it has its own science, its own way.. Not everyone can write good, neither everyone can understand. In poetry you have to deploy your heart along with your mind and then only beautiful words floats around you creating beautiful aroma not only for your but for the people who read it.

Hence below is one urdu/ hindi poetry about the poetry and its various kind of reader as well as writer. Let see how my reader will take it.

Shayari pagalpan hai yaa nahi, isi ko maine neeche apni kuch alfaanzoN ke zariye pesh kiya hai, aage padhe aur batayein apki raya.

Shayari ko koi fitoor bole,
Koi bole paagal pan,
Toh koi isse beja dastoor bole !!

Likh kar kuch lafz syahi se,
Rangeen kar diya kaagaz,
Kuch ke liye mahez alfaaz..
Parr koi isse noor bole!! (more…)

September 28, 2010 at 2:00 pm 5 comments

Ganda Khel- ये गन्‍दा खेल

I am again here with one more poetry. As with my recent poetry, this one is also on yet not so common subject. Here I have compiled few lines, in hindi language, written in devnagri script too .. regarding the pain of Mother Earth – Dharti Maa. She is in pain because of the terror and disturbance she is witnessing because of selfish human. She says, if there is blood, its blood of one of my child and above all its humanity which matters. So, she asks to end all this and too understand that we are just being manipulated and its the some selfish people who are taking advantage. She also prays God to punish those who are responsible for such heart piercing incident as well as to give humanity to those who might be next toys for some selfish people.

As usual, please do give your views, they are very valuable for me.

PS : I will try to type them in English script soon.

रोक दो रोक दो ये गंदा खेल रोक दो
मेरे सीने में दर्द हुआ अब बहुत
इस गंदे खेल को रोक दो
किसने खेला-क्‍यों खेला
दर्द सिर्फ मेरे सीने ने ही झेला
खून से चेहरा लाल मेरा
अब तो ये गदां खेल रोक दो
मातम छाया ह्रदय पर मेरे
पर विपक्ष तो सिर्फ है सत्‍ता के फेरे
उसने तो नित सत्‍ताधारी को दोशी पाया
सरकार को बुरा बनाने का कोई न मौका गवांया
साथ खड़े हों सारे
बने एक दूजे के सहारे
ऐसा उदाहरण एक भी न दिखाया
कब बहुरेगें दिन मेरे


November 29, 2008 at 9:34 pm 12 comments

Kaun mere lavz chura le gaya

Lets discuss that when one can write a good poem?
–> When he is just sitting to write a poem as per the given need like an professional poet given an assignment.


–> When he is so much deep into emotion that all it turns in to words… ?
I feel, none of above can get best out of that poet. Let me tell how, for first case-when one has to write as per need, then can not write at it best because feelings are not really true in that & for second “when one is so much into emotions” then emotion get over the person so much, then I don’t think can really write effectively.
So when one can write at best ?
According to me when there is balanced mood ie. person is emotional and yes he has to write a poem then can give best out. How this works, well.. its that person starts writing as he has too, but as he gets into writing then emotions start taking over but can not take over whole as you were not really in emotional state.
So those were my views.
Today, I am thinking to try one, but I am not really in balanced mood, sometimes I find moving towards emotional side or sometimes I feel that I should write one.
Btw, thank you very much that you are still reading.

Mujhe kehna hai bohot, meri ek ankahi kahani hai,
Kaise mein kahu sab, mere lavz ab mujhse hi bemani hain !

Ek ek zarra jorkar maine socha ki kuch aaj kehdun..
Magar aisi zarre ki kafiyat jaise bair meri uski purani hai !

Fir poocha zindagi se tu kyun itni bebas khadi hai..
Ek qatra bahaya usne aansu,nahin bachi usme zindagi hai !


July 23, 2007 at 5:58 pm 10 comments

Crossed 10,000 visitors mark today.

आज मैं सब हिन्दी में लिखना चाहता हूं लेकिन मुझे मालूम हुआ है कि मेरे कई शुभचितंक हिन्दी भाषा का ज्ञान नहीं रखते क्योंकि उनकी मातृभाषा उर्दू है, ऐसे में अंग्रेज़ी सबको जोङने का अच्छा साधन हैं, तो मैं आगे अंग्रज़ी में जारी रखूंगा|

So,today my blog crossed 10k (10,000) visitors mark. This is really good to see because on my this Shayari blog, I only shared my own poetry. So its obvious that not every poetry is always good as opposed to a blog where you are sharing all good poetry available among thousands.. rather 10 thousands from internet.

This is my first blog ever though I am in world of internet from few years but never tried blog but now I know that its a cool thing. Hassle free and expressive. As everything was ready to use hence it gave me time to do experiments.

I am thankful to my this blog because it is responsible for some classic poetry which I wrote and I like them. One is छूट चुकी है रेल : Hindi Kavita which I did mention in previous General Interaction note. There are then few others like “Dil Dil Dil Romantic Shayari” which is worthy to mention. Then I also tried few on SMS and those really came out to be nice one.

Ultimately, I am pretty happy that my blog contains All original poetry written by me. Above that I like that people appreciated my original work.

Though meanwhile I found that my poetry were posted at few places but without my name 😦 . I dislike this, people should value hardwork and emotions of poet and thus should not take credit and should give it to original author only.

Anyways, I am willing to find author who share only their original work and one is Ms. Shayara’s Shayariadab where she is also sharing her orignal work. Lastly, we are just part of Yoindia Shayari Community so I never forget to mention about it. Yoindia made us poet and I can’t deny this fact 🙂 .

Thankyou for reading.

March 26, 2007 at 8:17 pm 5 comments

छूट चुकी है रेलःहिन्दी कविताः(Hindi kavita-shayari)-Wahi Khamoshi Chaayi hai

Title of my poems are usually long like movies of Karan Johar 🙂 . But actually I want it to be descriptive as much as possible and also it will be good in for readers to decide to go for it or not though I want people to read my all poem and give their reviews as well suggestions on it.

निम्नलिखित कविता को आगे हिन्दी (देवनागरी) में भी लिखुगां|

So inspiration of this poem is like this..
I had not much chance to travel through railways but recently, I had to drop one of my known one to a railway station, In India its usual in delay of trains and hence this train was on platform for half hour opposed to its 10 mins expected stay. I was talking to that person for half and it was a not so busy station, more over it was late night then.
Everything was crowded & lots of movements because of that but once it left platform…

My poem is all about that ..

Jaa chuke hain sab aur wahi khamoshi chaayi hai,
Pasara hain har oar sannata, tanhai muskurai hai..

Chhoot chuki hai rail,
Chand lamho ki toh baat thi,

kya raunak thi yahaan,
Jaisi Saji koi mehfil khaas thi!!

Ajnabi thae chehre saare,
Phir bhi unse mulaaqaat thi..

Bheji thi kisi ne apnayiyat,
Salam mein woh kya baat thi..

Ek pal thae aap Jaise Kausar,
Ab bachi akeli raat thi…

Chalo ab laut chale yahan sae,
chhoot chuki hai rail
Yeh ab guzari baat thi…

Urte kaghaz,karte bayan,
Inki bhi kisi sae ,
do pal pehle kuch baat thi…

Barr chale kadam,
kanare un pateriyon
kahani jinke roz ye saath thi…

Phir aayegi dooji rail,
phir cheeregi ye sannnata,
jaise zindagi sae phir mulaqat thi…

phir luatenge aur ,
bhari kadmo sae, jaise
koi gehri see baat thi.

Chhoot chuki hai rail,
Ab sirf kaali syaha raat thi.

अब इसी कविता को देवनागरी में लिखा गया है


March 6, 2007 at 10:44 am 139 comments

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