जवान औरत-अनकही व्‍यथा

August 15, 2008 at 8:58 pm 14 comments

Same old thing, I do not write any more but sometimes I comes here with few odd creations, my experimentations…

Today, I am here with my attempt for a Hindi Poem. The topic of this POEM may be unheard to many. May be most of the people never noticed. Its about girls those just entered the adulthood or simply say, just grown up to girl from a child. I never saw any discussion about this topic ever, be it internet or real life. The topic is the situation of a young girl who is just grown up and find it hard to manage with those prying eyes which trying to look at her as if they are trying to unclad through eyes only.. They soon start to learn to be alert always and observing the people looking at them and trying to cover themselves though they are already well clothed.
Even if they don’t want they are still keeping note of how people are looking at them. Though with times it get normal but it is always there.
Not every person is looking at your with those x ray eyes but those few bad eyes makes them feel every one as suspect.

I am not sure how girl will take this poem I have tried to convey a problem which almost all girls face but they are never told that how to handle it. So I called it [b]Ankahi Vyatha[/b] ..

Jawaan aurat main bani,
yeh tan, yeh dheh kaya aisi nikhari..
Ki jaa ke kahan mein chippu,
Sankuchai si ki kaise teer drashti se bachun,
Mano mere tan nagn,
Kaise  swem ko surakshit mein rakhun?
Geedar samaan jaise mujhe woh ankhon se nochen..
Kya maine kiya koi apraadh..
Kyun mein iss apraadhbodh sang jeevan rachun?
Jo bachpan beeta laga mujhe
Ab nayi srashti mere angne pankh phelayegi..
Par maalum naa tha ki krur satya bhi saath layegi
Jaise lage ki har pal ek yudh ho
Aur nayan mere Yoddha evam
Har uss totalti drashti ke wo avruddh ho
Yeh kaisi vyatha ghir aayi
Abhi toh bachpan langha ..fir
Kyun ankahi duvidha maine payi
Kya mein Jawaan Aurat mein bani …
Aur mujhpe ye dandatmak karyewahi???????

Please give your views and specially girls are invited to say something about thought.
And in the last .. Please accept my apologies if I mis-represented any feeling or sentiments here. I will be more than happy if dear readers give their suggestion regarding this topic and explanation.

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14 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Lalan  |  August 20, 2008 at 8:54 am

    rrr

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  • 2. Shikha  |  September 1, 2008 at 10:07 am

    😎

    Awesome, Beautiful, Lovely, Excellent
    Good Thoughts and Innovative Thinking….
    Very Creative Writing.. Ikshayar…🙂

    Reply
  • 3. S.M.SHRIVASTAVA  |  November 9, 2008 at 3:09 am

    Jawaan aurat ko bina dekhe bina hi tabiyat mast hogayee parh kar itni badiya hai to dekhkar bahut hi achhi hogi 9itni achhi kavita likhne ke liye dhanyabad

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  • 4. sunny  |  December 25, 2008 at 9:56 am

    Ajeb baat hai. koi dekhe to problem, na dekhe to problem. jawaan aurat ki vyatha kuchh zyada hi gambhir hai.

    Reply
  • 5. BIg B  |  February 6, 2009 at 10:46 am

    Very NIce

    Reply
  • 6. Divya  |  March 31, 2009 at 7:41 am

    Maine yea kisi aur jagah pada tha… Bahoot hi khoob likha hai aapne Ikshayar

    Reply
  • 7. Sanjay  |  May 28, 2009 at 3:50 pm

    It is really inspiring.

    Reply
  • 8. maahtaab khan/facebook  |  August 26, 2011 at 7:21 am

    khub likha kuch aoor sahi

    Reply
  • 9. shiv kumar sagar  |  August 13, 2012 at 7:56 am

    agr koi ladka ya aadmi kisi ladki ya mahila ko glat nigaha se dekhta hai ya unke sath kuch glat vyvhar krta hi to iski jimmedar vo khud hoti hai,kyoki ye unka virodh nahi krti or in manchalo ke irade buland hote jate hai,agr koi ladka kisi ladki sath glat krta hai to ladki ko iska virod vahi pr hi krna chahiye na ki chup rahe,ladki ya aort ki ijjt khud usi ke hato me hoti hai,
    shiv kumar sagar,
    9808444746

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  • 10. shiv kumar sagar  |  March 20, 2013 at 4:08 pm

    bhoot khoob shiv kumar sagar……mo no:9808444746….email id:shiv9808444746@gmail .com…………..kshiv387@gmail.com

    Reply
  • 11. Bashir Badr  |  April 20, 2013 at 10:52 am

    this is totally awesome writing, I am amazed, that how can one write so beautifully. It really took my heart away and I will say, this a good writing on woman.

    Reply
  • 12. Vishali  |  June 21, 2013 at 4:11 am

    kya baat likhi hai aapne…. bohat hi khoobsurat

    Reply
  • 13. Chamandeep  |  July 12, 2013 at 2:06 pm

    eh mainu bahut hi changa lagya… thank you

    Reply
  • 14. randhir kumar  |  May 20, 2014 at 9:21 am

    Hair kisiko bura math shmjhna

    Reply

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