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जवान औरत-अनकही व्‍यथा

Same old thing, I do not write any more but sometimes I comes here with few odd creations, my experimentations…

Today, I am here with my attempt for a Hindi Poem. The topic of this POEM may be unheard to many. May be most of the people never noticed. Its about girls those just entered the adulthood or simply say, just grown up to girl from a child. I never saw any discussion about this topic ever, be it internet or real life. The topic is the situation of a young girl who is just grown up and find it hard to manage with those prying eyes which trying to look at her as if they are trying to unclad through eyes only.. They soon start to learn to be alert always and observing the people looking at them and trying to cover themselves though they are already well clothed.
Even if they don’t want they are still keeping note of how people are looking at them. Though with times it get normal but it is always there.
Not every person is looking at your with those x ray eyes but those few bad eyes makes them feel every one as suspect.

I am not sure how girl will take this poem I have tried to convey a problem which almost all girls face but they are never told that how to handle it. So I called it [b]Ankahi Vyatha[/b] ..

Jawaan aurat main bani,
yeh tan, yeh dheh kaya aisi nikhari..
Ki jaa ke kahan mein chippu,
Sankuchai si ki kaise teer drashti se bachun,
Mano mere tan nagn,
Kaise  swem ko surakshit mein rakhun?
Geedar samaan jaise mujhe woh ankhon se nochen..
Kya maine kiya koi apraadh..
Kyun mein iss apraadhbodh sang jeevan rachun?
Jo bachpan beeta laga mujhe
Ab nayi srashti mere angne pankh phelayegi..
Par maalum naa tha ki krur satya bhi saath layegi
Jaise lage ki har pal ek yudh ho
Aur nayan mere Yoddha evam
Har uss totalti drashti ke wo avruddh ho
Yeh kaisi vyatha ghir aayi
Abhi toh bachpan langha ..fir
Kyun ankahi duvidha maine payi
Kya mein Jawaan Aurat mein bani …
Aur mujhpe ye dandatmak karyewahi???????

Please give your views and specially girls are invited to say something about thought.
And in the last .. Please accept my apologies if I mis-represented any feeling or sentiments here. I will be more than happy if dear readers give their suggestion regarding this topic and explanation.

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August 15, 2008 at 8:58 pm 14 comments


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