Sochta hun Gumnaam ho jaun: ikShayar

April 12, 2008 at 7:00 pm 7 comments

Today I am with two poems but both are on same subject or rather say same theme. There is not much to talk about about those poems. Please read on. Before reading further, please not they both of the poems are not based on any definitive poetic pattern. Those are just few lines talking about something in poetic manner.

So here is the poem :

Sochta hun apna makaan badal dun,
Gum ho jaun, naa koi jaane mujhe,
Aise Jahan k naam khud ko kardun,

Jo Khat naa ayenge,
Unki aas naa lagaun ab,

Mera apna naa ho koi pata,
Harr zehen apni baat mitaun ab..

Likh jo diyen hain Chand Alfaaz yahan,
Fakat Kaghaz pe kuch andaaz hain,
Bohot chhota hai inka kadd,
Aur naa inpe hum utna naaz hai… !!

~ikShayar
I will post second one soon, reading on above lines I feel something is missing but I think its alright to share this sort of poems too. Though this poem is not clearly talking about the reason but it is giving hint. !

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Holi, piya aur bhang: traditional kavita Holi ki v2-Gumshuda hona Chahte hain! Poetry by ikShayar

7 Comments Add your own

  • 1. maida  |  April 19, 2008 at 11:25 am

    fine

    Reply
  • 2. TRISHA  |  April 22, 2008 at 6:21 am

    AWESOME MAN………………………………………………….

    Reply
  • 3. Raj  |  June 16, 2008 at 6:43 am

    its really nice !! i have no words to write here….

    Reply
  • 4. ikshayar  |  July 5, 2008 at 7:03 pm

    Thankyou Trisha and Raj..

    Reply
  • 5. hussain  |  August 10, 2008 at 6:02 am

    i like it

    Reply
  • 6. AFTAB  |  October 17, 2008 at 11:12 am

    oh, good
    ……………………..inke age ek duniya aur bhi ha dost

    Reply
  • 7. sulman  |  July 18, 2009 at 5:04 pm

    in ke aaga ek duniya aur bhi hai dosto ok

    Reply

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