Mujhe hai ahsaas ki woh nahi hai!

August 11, 2007 at 10:12 pm 28 comments

Lately I was reading few poems from various poets, I tried to adopt that way and here is another poem.
I think its longest one I ever wrote. Do comment please.

Ahsaas hai mujhe ki woh ab nahi hai
Nahi hai wo mere sang nahi hai..
Door toh woh tha hee .. Magar ..
Magar ab woh hai hee nahi hai !!
Hai nahi koi umeed fir bhi .. kyun…
Nazar meri kuch dhoondh rahi hai ?.
Dhoondhna chahti hai kyun ab bhi woh..
uske lavzo me mera naam jo ab wahan nahi hai !
Wahan kuch surkh ho gaya hai ya..
Yahan kuch khalti kami hai ?
Khalti hai nazar mujhe meri .. Jo
Harr taraf teri hi nazar dhoondh rahi hai !
Mujhe ahsaas hai ki teri hansi mein ..
Hai chhupi meri hansi hai !

Garr baha ek bhi qatra yahan gham ka..
Gham woh gham nahi garr fiza teri mehki hui hai !
Meri shikayat uss tak naa pohochegi ..
Na pohochegi kyunki uski rehmat bhi badi hai,
Badi hai uski harr kahani kyunki
Uss kahani usne khushi teri likhi hai !
Main na hi uska rasta naa koi manzil…
Yeh toh usay kahin aur hi dikhi hai !
Shahakaar mere hai khuburat Kyunki
Unme tera aks.. meri zindagi bhari hai ..
Dikh toh jayega usko usme kuch ..
K usme mere tassavur mein tuh judi hai..
Judi hai jaane kis dorr sae tuti patang
Nahi pata ki ye meri khata ya ..
Isme abhi bhi kuch taan padi hai ??
Ahsaas hai mujhe ki woh ab nahi hai..
Kitna asaan hai dekho jeena zindagi
K Zindagi bhi ab soch mein padi hai.
Kar di khali maine soch kisi ki ..
Soch mein kyun ab meri khushi padi hai ?..
Kushi hai kashmakash mein lekin ..
Kashmakash beparwah khadi hai ..
Pata hai usko ki kisi ko ab khushi mili hai !
Aah na pohonchegi wahan .. kyunki
Aah dard ae sabab uske liye fir bani hai..
Daba diya hai isko kahin..
Kahin chupa diya naa ab ye samne bachi hai..
Jaa chuke hain woh unke liye ab
manzar khudai lekar naya khadi hai..
naya manzar toh yahan bhi hai ..
Kahi koi baat khaali toh kayi baatoN ki jhadi hai
Ahsaas hai mujhko k woh ab nahi hai
Jo nahi thi haath mein ab ankhon se bhi ojhal ho chali hai !

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28 Comments Add your own

  • 1. himesh  |  August 26, 2007 at 5:48 pm

    yaar its great. you r brilliant poet and from ow i ur fan

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  • 2. ikshayar  |  August 26, 2007 at 7:43 pm

    Thankyou Himesh..
    You gave your time in reading this long poem..
    I am very much glad !

    Reply
  • 3. ankit  |  September 10, 2007 at 7:40 am

    nice work on shayarii keep it gys and send me some sad shayarii ok ……………

    Reply
  • 4. ikshayar  |  September 11, 2007 at 7:43 am

    Thankyou!

    Reply
  • 5. well wisher  |  September 18, 2007 at 3:52 am

    Suoerb…its realy superb. a feeling N reality of life.. well described.

    Reply
  • 6. ikshayar  |  September 22, 2007 at 8:12 am

    Shukriya.. I hv feeling that I know u🙂

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  • 7. well wisher  |  September 24, 2007 at 5:09 am

    :-}

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  • 8. ikshayar  |  September 26, 2007 at 7:49 pm

    Ya.. I know you!!

    Reply
  • 9. well wisher  |  September 27, 2007 at 6:13 am

    🙂🙂

    Reply
  • 10. anshu  |  October 21, 2007 at 9:09 am

    excellent boss this touches the feeling

    Reply
  • 11. ikshayar  |  October 21, 2007 at 5:46 pm

    Thankyou Anshu !

    Reply
  • […] wrote my longest poem also “Mujhe ahsaas hai ki woh nahi hai” . Reader like “Himesh” who said that after reading that poem he is my fan really […]

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  • 13. Neha  |  November 14, 2007 at 8:32 am

    Fullan nu fadne to pehla, Kandeyan nu jarna v sikh lai !
    Eh zindagi vaat e kandeyan di, eyhe fullan di na bhaal kari,
    Eh agg da ikk dariya vehnda, tu agg vich tarna v sikh lai !
    J mout to tainu darr laggda eh ishq tere layi nahi baneya,
    Ishq mangda e khoon ashqan da ishq karn layi marna v sikh lai!!

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  • 14. hasan  |  December 11, 2007 at 11:24 am

    xellent..!!

    Reply
  • 15. ikshayar  |  December 14, 2007 at 7:29 am

    Thankyou Hasan🙂

    Reply
  • 16. shahzad khan  |  December 19, 2007 at 7:06 pm

    iove

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  • 17. Jaanu  |  January 21, 2008 at 10:41 am

    YE KHOOB SURAT NAZRAANAA KISKA HAI ………

    Ye Insaan ki Surat me Karamaati Putla
    Pal Pal Bahakta, Machalta, Ucchalta
    Sarat kabhi to kabhi masti ka Aalam
    Phoolo sa khilta Mahakta Bachpan
    Khusboo se Chalakti Baali Umariya
    Tadpti, Machalti Jawaani ka Aalam
    Tootta hua Phir Budhape ka Daaman
    Ek Pal KO Sochoo Jara ………
    Ye Khoob Surat Nazarana kiska hai……..

    Kitne Rangoon me Paayi hai Fitrat Teri
    Kab Jaane tu Paalanhar banker Aaya
    Kisi Ke Sir Pe Tha woo Dulaara Hath,
    Kisi Ke Aanchal me Pyar Ki Khusbu,
    Kisi Ki Aankho main Chalakta jam Aaya
    Kismat Me Tha Jiski Bas woo hi Paya
    Ek Pal KO Sochoo Jara ………
    Ye Khoob Surat Nazarana kiska hai……..

    Jo Soota Hai Oonche Mahalo Mai
    Woo Makhmali Libaas me Simta…
    Chandan SA Badan WO Sise Si Kaya
    Ek WO Bhi Hai Jisne Kabhi ye Na Jana
    Ki Ye Hota hai Libaas kaisa,
    Kahate hai Kisko Aasiyaana
    Aur Bayan Kya Karu Uski Adaa KO
    Kafan se Bhi Jism KO Mahroom Paya
    Ek Pal KO Sochoo Jara ki………
    Ye Khoob Surat Nazarana kiska hai……..

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  • 18. .mayank  |  March 6, 2008 at 1:48 pm

    hey janu..its really great……keep it up dude…….i hope that i will read some more from u ……gud luk….

    Reply
  • 19. Ruchi  |  March 12, 2008 at 2:07 pm

    Ikshayar,aadab again..aj apki y long poem pyar ki sachai bayan kar gai,ki kai log na hoke bhi hote hai..keep it up..jiske lie likha hai apne..vo to ro padi hogi? Good nite

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  • 20. ikshayar  |  March 13, 2008 at 11:50 am

    Thankyou Ruchi for your kind words.

    Reply
  • 21. mani  |  March 28, 2008 at 9:47 am

    its so beautiful. a bit long but so emotional…
    I just was feeling dat way in dat mood ki ab yeh poem ne sari ki sari feelings biyaan kar di..
    I love it

    kepp it up… love to hear more…

    n thx for sharing🙂

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  • 22. ikshayar  |  July 5, 2008 at 6:59 pm

    Thankyou Mani..

    It feels really good when people appreciate from heart.

    Reply
  • 23. ritu kankani  |  July 9, 2008 at 1:09 am

    awesome man…i thought i was the best 1 to write such a pretty sad part of lyf but realised that ya some 1 even feels the same….keep continuing with such a way ahead,all the best.!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • 24. ikshayar  |  November 6, 2008 at 12:22 pm

    Shukriya Ritu!

    Reply
  • 25. A.S.RATHORE  |  February 18, 2011 at 2:31 am

    DIL SE NIKLA,DIL TAK PAHUCHA,DIL KI BAAT LABO TAK AAYI.

    Reply
  • 26. Vasudeva Nm  |  December 27, 2011 at 2:29 pm

    Awsomness cant get better………..cheers dude🙂

    Reply
  • 27. Adarsh  |  February 21, 2012 at 2:09 pm

    Bahutttttt achi poem hai bhai,thanx padhne ke baad dil purani yado me kho gaya,

    Reply
  • 28. ikshayar  |  April 28, 2012 at 8:48 pm

    Thank you Adarsh🙂

    Reply

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