Saza maine payi per gunegaar toh nahin..(dard pyar shayri)

August 4, 2007 at 7:52 pm 17 comments

Every other day I come up with few interesting lines and wanted to convert them into poems but I am failing in that again and again.

Kaise aage badhe hum jab
manzil hi hamari kahin peeche thahar gayi !
Gazur rahe thae jab uske paas sae..
na usne roka, naa usne awas di, sirf khamosh reh gayi !

The above one are those which I wrote few days ago, there are few others too but as new one comes, old ones lost there charm. Today I am thinking to complete above one ie. add something in them. So lets try:

Kaise aage badhe hum jab
manzil hi hamari kahin peeche thahar gayi !
Gazur rahe thae jab uske paas sae..
na usne roka, naa usne awas di, sirf khamoshi reh gayi !

Dekha tha usko door jaate hue maine,
Ghard bhi uski rah se hathai thi maine,
Kya uski saza mujhe milegi baar baar
Aisi bhi kya khatayon ki kadi banayi thi maine .. !

Gehre kahin chot hui hai mere,
Gehrai itni gehri ki ankhoN sae wo ojhal !
Dekhe jo mera dil bhi jo gehra mere itna
Na milegi usko bhi woh mayus si halchal !

Itna bikhra k pani logo ne samajhe liya
Jaise chaha waise bahaya mujhko
Jab aas jaati rahi mere wajood ki
Jhat sae raah badal muh fer liya !

Mere pehnaave ko mera dil samajha kisi ne
Na uski dhadkano ka khayal kiya kisi ne
Tadap tadap ke dhadak rahi thiN..
Zindagi ka unhe dooja ayaam samjha kisine

Saza maine payi thi per gunehgaar toh nahin
Beh ke sukhe ashq baar baar
Inka koi kahin bhi parastar toh nahin !!

~ikShayar

This poem is not really a standard one but it is like neckless where various parts are stiched together.

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17 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Amit  |  September 26, 2007 at 10:19 am

    wahhhhh dill hil gaya…

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  • 2. ikshayar  |  September 26, 2007 at 7:47 pm

    Thankyou Amit !

    Reply
  • 3. sarfu  |  November 2, 2007 at 11:32 am

    masha allah ikshayar ki kya baat hai

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  • 4. ikshayar  |  November 2, 2007 at 6:33 pm

    Thankyou Sarfu !🙂

    Reply
  • 5. shalu  |  December 5, 2007 at 5:31 pm

    very nice…………

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  • 6. ikshayar  |  December 6, 2007 at 6:07 pm

    Shukriya !

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  • 7. iffi  |  January 23, 2008 at 8:14 am

    its been wonderfull to read all this i love shair-o-shairy and yaha to dil jale bohat hai lovely collection keep it up (U)

    Ghum aashiqii key marey Sar-e-Aaam tak na pohnchey,, Kabi subah tak na aye to kabi Sham tak na pohnchey,, May nazar se Pee raha tha kay ye dil ne Baduaa di,, Tera hath zindgi bhar kabi Jaam tak na pohnchey..!! ‘
    ========================================
    Guzar jayenge bin uske bhi achhe vo pal,jinhe hum intezar aur wo waqt kahete hai,kya pata kiun bhul gaye wo “DOSTI” jise hum rishta aur wo ek “LAFZ” kahete hai !

    Reply
  • 8. mahir  |  April 2, 2008 at 11:58 am

    ikshayar ab kya kahen apki tarif ko sabd hi nahi mil rahe

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  • 9. ikshayar  |  April 10, 2008 at 11:06 pm

    Thankyou Mahir and IFFI,
    It feels good when my words are appreciated by people like you !

    Reply
  • 10. Deepika Vashisht  |  April 21, 2008 at 5:23 am

    WONDERFULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!! Don’t know who you are but greatttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt work. KEEP IT UP. GOD BLESS YOU!

    Reply
  • 11. ikshayar  |  April 21, 2008 at 10:17 am

    I am ikShayar
    That is my identity here. Thankyou for your nice words.

    Reply
  • 12. rohit king  |  April 10, 2011 at 4:34 pm

    rohit

    Reply
  • 13. akki srivastava  |  May 27, 2011 at 9:22 am

    very nice

    Reply
  • 14. DJ  |  June 13, 2011 at 7:36 pm

    Saza maine payi par gunhagar me nahi,use kyun dosh dun uski bhi koi khata nahi,dil hi tha jo un par aaya jinhe pyar humara kabul nahi.

    Reply
  • 15. shayari  |  August 7, 2011 at 6:44 am

    Dil Laga Kar To Bas Saza Ki Umeed Hi Pakki Hoti Hai, Sath Ki Nahi…

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  • 16. Rohit Sachan  |  December 23, 2011 at 4:51 am

    Great yaar!
    Mohabbat ke liye kuchh khas dil maksus hote hai, ye wo nagma hai jo hr saj pe bajaya nhi jata.
    I hate saumya

    Reply
  • 17. akash a rex  |  January 9, 2013 at 1:42 pm

    dil ke baat only akash k sath

    Reply

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