Kaun mere lavz chura le gaya
Lets discuss that when one can write a good poem?
–> When he is just sitting to write a poem as per the given need like an professional poet given an assignment.
–> When he is so much deep into emotion that all it turns in to words… ?
I feel, none of above can get best out of that poet. Let me tell how, for first case-when one has to write as per need, then can not write at it best because feelings are not really true in that & for second “when one is so much into emotions” then emotion get over the person so much, then I don’t think can really write effectively.
So when one can write at best ?
According to me when there is balanced mood ie. person is emotional and yes he has to write a poem then can give best out. How this works, well.. its that person starts writing as he has too, but as he gets into writing then emotions start taking over but can not take over whole as you were not really in emotional state.
So those were my views.
Today, I am thinking to try one, but I am not really in balanced mood, sometimes I find moving towards emotional side or sometimes I feel that I should write one.
Btw, thank you very much that you are still reading.
Mujhe kehna hai bohot, meri ek ankahi kahani hai,
Kaise mein kahu sab, mere lavz ab mujhse hi bemani hain !
Ek ek zarra jorkar maine socha ki kuch aaj kehdun..
Magar aisi zarre ki kafiyat jaise bair meri uski purani hai !
Fir poocha zindagi se tu kyun itni bebas khadi hai..
Ek qatra bahaya usne aansu,nahin bachi usme zindagi hai !
Fir kadam aur badhe, dhunda kuch apno ko..
Haath badhaya parr dekho wahan bhi masumiyat badi hai !
Fir dekha uss aasma ki aur, suna hai uski daulat badi hai,
Ab kya usse poochon, zindagi toh uski hi dee hui hai !
Fakat ek chhoti si zindagani hai usme bhi kitni kahani hain…
Iss rah k hum nahin rahi fir bhi kadmo se yahan dhool udani hai !
Murr k dekha unn panno pe jahan apni kahani sunani hai..
Kaun Chura le gaya mere lavz,sukhi syahi se ibarat banani hai!!!
Here these were few lines, still these are not those which I wanted to say but are fine, its a small poem with simple meaning.