Archive for July, 2007

Kaun mere lavz chura le gaya

Lets discuss that when one can write a good poem?
–> When he is just sitting to write a poem as per the given need like an professional poet given an assignment.

or

–> When he is so much deep into emotion that all it turns in to words… ?
I feel, none of above can get best out of that poet. Let me tell how, for first case-when one has to write as per need, then can not write at it best because feelings are not really true in that & for second “when one is so much into emotions” then emotion get over the person so much, then I don’t think can really write effectively.
So when one can write at best ?
According to me when there is balanced mood ie. person is emotional and yes he has to write a poem then can give best out. How this works, well.. its that person starts writing as he has too, but as he gets into writing then emotions start taking over but can not take over whole as you were not really in emotional state.
So those were my views.
Today, I am thinking to try one, but I am not really in balanced mood, sometimes I find moving towards emotional side or sometimes I feel that I should write one.
Btw, thank you very much that you are still reading.

Mujhe kehna hai bohot, meri ek ankahi kahani hai,
Kaise mein kahu sab, mere lavz ab mujhse hi bemani hain !

Ek ek zarra jorkar maine socha ki kuch aaj kehdun..
Magar aisi zarre ki kafiyat jaise bair meri uski purani hai !

Fir poocha zindagi se tu kyun itni bebas khadi hai..
Ek qatra bahaya usne aansu,nahin bachi usme zindagi hai !

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July 23, 2007 at 5:58 pm 10 comments

Kash hum bezuban hote!- ik Shayari

Word Poetry itself says a thousand of things, whenever you hear it, I am sure you can feel the waves in your mind of soothing words.

Today I have poem which is asking to get “Bezubaan” so that even if there is pain, can’t express and because can’t express so its intensity will not be same as always. We many times use “Bezubaan” for animals because they can’t speak. Even if it is in pain, you can hardly guess it. If you want to feel then put yourself there to understand the force. Literally, Bezubaan means one who cannot speak.

So here is the poem:

Kash hum bezubaan hote,
Naa fir gham yun bayaan hote !!

Kash naa hoti zindagi ki samajh,
Naa fir yun afsaane jawaan hote !!

Kash naa khwahish hoti kuch paane ki,
Naa fir kuch khone k gham yahan hote !!

Gar tod jaata koi ashiyaaN humara,
Fir bhi khoobsurat saare samaan hote !!

Lut Jaati gar Roshni-e-zindagi,
Fir bhi andhere naa yahan hote !!

Toot-te hue bhi be-shubhaah hote !
Kash hum bezubaan hote !!
Kash hum bezubaan hote !!

Ok, so that was the poem, will write it in Devnagri soon!
Thank you for reading it.
Urdu Hindi funny shayari

July 2, 2007 at 8:05 am 17 comments


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