Pyar ki paimaish ek sms mein

May 16, 2007 at 5:41 pm 16 comments

I was asked by my friend to write few lines for him & he wanted to send those line to someone special for him. He simply asked that how can he show that his Love for someone is everything.
I made few simple lines and are below :

Chand lavz hum ukere kaaghaz pe,
K ik farmaish farmai unhone !!
Likh diya naam hi unka humne,
Jo maangi pyaar ki paimaish unhone !!

अब इसे देवनागरी में लिखें तोः

चंद लव्ज़ हम उकेरें काग़ज़ पे,
के इक फरमाइश फरमाई उन्होनें !
लिख दिया नाम ही उनका हमनें,
जो मागीं प्यार की पैमाइश उन्हानें !

So, I will explain it now, here she asked him to write something about intensity of his love for her. So.. He wrote her NAME because for him.. even her name means LOVE, devotion & dedication.. !!

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Asaan nahi ishq ki rawayat(A poetry for sms) Tuh gham naa karr (ikshayar)

16 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Best wisher  |  July 13, 2007 at 9:19 am

    pyar ki ek paimaish.. …. really sweet & simple quote by u… simple good

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    • 2. AMIR03  |  November 20, 2009 at 10:39 am

      sar juka kar chal ne wali aankh uta kar to dekho
      tumare liye dil kis tarah jal raha hai tum sine main haat laga kar to dekho

      Reply
  • 3. ikshayar  |  July 15, 2007 at 6:24 am

    Thankyou🙂

    Reply
  • 4. ansh  |  August 20, 2007 at 4:29 pm

    Mohabat ki kasti sabare the ham ne
    Socha tha pahuch jayege chahat ki ganw me
    Dubne laga to hos aaya
    Ham to bethe hai kagaj ki nanw me

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  • 5. Nikhil  |  January 16, 2008 at 10:00 am

    Is it works. mujhe bhi pyaar ki paimaish hai.

    Reply
  • 6. S.M.A.MOBIN.K.  |  January 20, 2008 at 11:25 am

    dil se chaha hai appko
    dil se manga hai appko
    kya khami thi mujh mein
    kya dosti buladhi appne
    Hum tho appke hi rahe
    app ho gaye kisike
    yeh dil na mahne
    kya dosti nibhaye appne
    per bhi hum Rab seh aapki khushi mangtay hai,
    Duaon main aapki hansi mangtay hai,
    Sochte kya mangain aap seh,
    Chalo aapki umar bhar ki Dosti mangtay hai

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  • 7. Deepika Vashisht  |  April 21, 2008 at 5:12 am

    These lines by you… “Chand lafz……….” are simply very very beautiful. Simple and the best of a kind…… heart touching……!!!!!!!!!!! GOD BLESS YOU and ALL THE VERY BEST for future!!!!1 Keep writing such good things. Your Friend is lucky to have you. TAKE CARE and have a good time.

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    • 8. arkay  |  April 6, 2013 at 2:17 am

      Note plz Deepika Vashisht ko
      The persone here who is claiming that he has written it himself ,he is simply lying.. He is is not the original writer.
      At least b honest enf to to say its a copy …

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      • 9. arkay  |  April 6, 2013 at 2:19 am

        I was asked by my friend to write few lines for him & he wanted to send those line to someone special for him. He simply asked that how can he show that his Love for someone is everything.
        I made few simple lines and are below :
        Chand lavz hum ukere kaaghaz pe,
        K ik farmaish farmai unhone !!
        Likh diya naam hi unka humne,
        Jo maangi pyaar ki paimaish unhone !!
        Whoever it is .. but be honest enf to say its not you who has written it … and say its a You have copied it .. and kam se kam copying to thik karte aap..

  • 10. ikshayar  |  April 21, 2008 at 10:16 am

    Thankyou for your such a nice words !

    Reply
  • 11. Yakub Ansari  |  July 9, 2009 at 3:41 am

    Mohabbat dard hote hai
    Nazar se kam nahi hoti
    Aap ke dur rahne se
    Mohabbat kam nahi hoti.

    Ishqbaazi me to wahdat ka mazaa milta hai
    Agar ishq sacha hai to bande ko khuda milta hai.

    Reply
  • 12. Anayat A.S.A  |  June 9, 2011 at 4:17 pm

    I Love sak

    Reply
  • 13. Himanshu  |  August 9, 2011 at 9:19 am

    hi frd muje apki shayri bahot at6i lagi he to ap muje ye shayri mobile send kijiye my mobile no
    9727683337 he.

    Reply
  • 14. Gamansinh rajput  |  March 28, 2012 at 6:03 am

    Dil chu gayi Aapki shayri.thankyou…

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  • 15. arkay  |  April 6, 2013 at 2:23 am

    Whoever it is .. but be honest enf to say its not you who has written it … and say its a You have copied it ( you are not the original writer)
    .. and kam se kam copying to thik karte aap……

    I was asked by my friend to write few lines for him & he wanted to send those line to someone special for him. He simply asked that how can he show that his Love for someone is everything.
    I made few simple lines and are below :
    Chand lavz hum ukere kaaghaz pe,
    K ik farmaish farmai unhone !!
    Likh diya naam hi unka humne,
    Jo maangi pyaar ki paimaish unhone !!
    Whoever it is .. but be honest enf to say its not you who has written it … and say its a You have copied it .. and kam se kam copying to thik karte aap..
    Chand Lafz Ukhade Diye Kore kagaz Pe, Rakhi jo Ik Farmaish Usne
    SoTo Likh Diya Naam Hii Uska , Maangi Jab Pyaar Ki paimsih Usne|…rk

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    • 16. ikshayar  |  June 10, 2013 at 9:53 am

      You are so blunt and surprising too (and many things more)
      For so called arkay, I wrote this back in year 2007 .. years back and now you are coming in 2013 saying that its stolen.

      Whomsoever you are, you are not one with poetic heart, I have had hard time to understand your comment. One who can’t even express himself properly in normal language can’t be a poet.

      Hope I make sense to you and everyone else who is reading it.

      Reply

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