mein ik Shayar. Sher o Shayari ka ikShayar

I posted a poem a while ago , this one which is now I am going to post is its second version. The poem earlier posted is also on same theme as this one.

Previous one can be found at : Sochta hun Gumnam Ho Jaun

As I mentioned in previous poem that something is missing so I guess I have worked upon that missing piece in this version. So Here is the poem.

Khamosh rakhna chahte hain
Inn lavzon ko duniya sae dur rakhna chahte hain,
Naa jane kya ye kehde,isliye inko..
Kaghaz sae durr, be arayish rakhna chahte hain !

Koi pooch naa le aake humse sabab..
Aur hum ab gumshuda hona chahte hain..

Shayad kamyab ho jayen iss justuju..
Wajah yahi ki makaam apna badalna chahte hain…

Dayera bamushkil itna ho,
Jee sake bass aur kuch nahi….
Wo makaan ab aisa chahte hain,
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Today I am with two poems but both are on same subject or rather say same theme. There is not much to talk about about those poems. Please read on. Before reading further, please not they both of the poems are not based on any definitive poetic pattern. Those are just few lines talking about something in poetic manner.

So here is the poem :

Sochta hun apna makaan badal dun,
Gum ho jaun, naa koi jaane mujhe,
Aise Jahan k naam khud ko kardun,

Jo Khat naa ayenge,
Unki aas naa lagaun ab, (more…)

Today is Valentines day, the 14th February, may be a day for lots of excitement for many. There are many stories regarding how Valentines day came in existence, however it is clear that there was a person named St. Valentines. But every year I see different story about the origin of Valentines Day. So in brief from the latest story I came to know about Valentines day, it was that in Rome in ancient times, a king for some reason imposed ban on marriage then it was St. Valentines who was helping people to marry and then he was caught. He used to say that there No Life Without Love. In cell, daughter of the King used to visit him as she was impressed a lot. He was sentenced to death by the king. Both gradually developed affection for each other and then the final day came. Just before his death he wrote a letter to the daughter of King.. the letter has final lines saying :

“Accept the Love of your Valentines”

So,may be I can write a small poem for the above story but in Hindi this time. As always, I am not regular to my this corner on the web. But atleast I should write something on day of love. I wrote on Independence day and few others so should write on Valentines day too.

व्यथा है, एक कथा है, प्रेम की सदैव यही प्र‍था है,
वर्ष बीते अनेक किंतु प्रेम बलिदान ने इतिहास रचा है,
प्रीत रीत उस भले मानस की,आज भी प्रेरणास्त्रोत उंचा है,

कितने राजे आये,प्रेम पंरपरा न डिगा पाये,
कोयल सी इस कूक को, गीदड़बग्घी से न उरा पाये,
कष्ट, पीड़ा की न सीमा,पर न कोई इसे मिटा पाये,

प्रेम दिवस है नाम दिया, संत ने जीवनदान दिया,
पाठ पढ़ाया, प्रेम बिना न कोई जीवन,
प्रेमपथ रोड़ा उस मृत्यु को भी सम्मान दिया,

व्यथा है, एक कथा है, प्रेम की सदैव यही प्र‍था है,
कभी रुप वेलेंटांइस, कभी जन मानस ब्यार,
बहती गंगा मानिंद ये प्रेम कभी न रुका है

So above was my little try, I know there are many who can understand hindi but can’t read it so I am typing again in English fonts..

Vyatha hai, ek katha hai, prem ki sadaiv yahi pratha hai,
Beete varsha anek kintu prem balidan ne itihaas racha hai,
Preet reet uss bhale maanas ki, aaj bhi prerna srot uncha hai, (more…)

Once this place was filled with new poetries every now and then but now I rarely write anything here but I do come daily and visit this place to see what is going on my this “corner” on web.

Below are few lines I am sharing, I hope dear readers will like it.

Iss Khamoshi pe mat jana,
ToofaaN sae guzar k aaya hun maiN !!

Cheen le gaya mujhko mujhse hi,
Ya shayad khud ko hi bhool aaya hun maiN !!

Be sabab-Be wajah ab lagein mehfillen,
Wajah ae Ishrat shayad luta aaya hun meiN !!

Mehazur iss duniya sae ya huN khoya khoya,
Shayad issar ae zindagi chorr aaya huN meiN !!

Jo leke aaya, wo hai khamoshi,
ab bass kh’mush, kavish ae mehzoozi gavaaN aaya huN meiN !!

~ikShayar

Shayari e Dard Urdu Shayari Indian Forum

About this poem :
Precious one ! Don’t want to add anything else.

Khamoshi gehri hai, kuch tadap raha hai,
Kahin saazish ye mujhpe hi na karde !!

Falak ye itna bara per mere liye nahin,
Inteha ho, yeh kahin mujhpe baarish naa karde !!

Kuwwat meri mere saath shiddat se per ab kahin,
Naraaz ho mujhse, dagha naa karde !!

Mere lavzon mein hai bharipan,
kahin ye aur dard naa bhardein !!

Behoshi sa aalam har pal, per hain saansein,
Bojhil ho toot jayen aur sharminda naa karden… !!

Lets divert the thoughts now and do you know that Yoindia is now Shayariadab ie. Yoindia Shayariadab

ikShayar!

This is how I am known here, thousands have people viewed my poetry here. I am not regular in writing poetry now but still people are regular here sometimes looking for a dard poetry or simply sometimes looking for something to send as Good Night sms!

A beautiful small world where people come and interacts with me, give me reason to smile everytime when someone give a positive response to my poetry. Yes there were 2 negative responses too but I feel they were about their taste but not my poetry.

People like Sumer Singh called me a beautiful person when, you can see it on his blog. Thankyou Sumer.

Then there was a well wisher who read all my poetry one by one by digging all, even the oldest one and gave me another reason to smile by showing respect to my work. (more…)

I wanted to way something on Independence day but really never completed it. I wrote few lines but now only remembers to complete it. Its still Independence day so I am not really late.
This time, will try pure Hindi so outcome may not be so perfect.

So there is poem Devoted to Bharat Maa

Bharat Maa Tujhe Pranaam

O maa teri hum santaan
Tune jo diya hume ..
Teri har den k liye tujhe Pranaam

Teri hi goad humari palanhaar
Natmastak hum tere
Maa ki mamta apaar

O maa tujhse hai prarthna
Ek sur me hum fir bandhe
Gunje fir ekta ki garjana

Jaise pushp sare ek daal k wasi
ke antarman mein ho sada
deshprem ki bhawna aisi

Kartavya sae naa koi hathe pare
Desh hith desh samman hetu
Nagrik harr ek desh ka aage bare !!

Kare raksha, na bache koi vyatha
Bharat maa ke hridaya mile sukh
Har aur gunje bass yahi naveen gatha !!

Dharam Jati se upar
O maa ho akela tera hi naam..
Bharat maa tujhe pranaam !!

So that was the short simple Hindi Kavita, I wish to write more but seems I am already late and do not want to delay more. I hope readers are going to enjoy it.
Patriotic Poetry Indian

Lately I was reading few poems from various poets, I tried to adopt that way and here is another poem.
I think its longest one I ever wrote. Do comment please.

Ahsaas hai mujhe ki woh ab nahi hai
Nahi hai wo mere sang nahi hai..
Door toh woh tha hee .. Magar ..
Magar ab woh hai hee nahi hai !!
Hai nahi koi umeed fir bhi .. kyun…
Nazar meri kuch dhoondh rahi hai ?.
Dhoondhna chahti hai kyun ab bhi woh..
uske lavzo me mera naam jo ab wahan nahi hai !
Wahan kuch surkh ho gaya hai ya..
Yahan kuch khalti kami hai ?
Khalti hai nazar mujhe meri .. Jo
Harr taraf teri hi nazar dhoondh rahi hai !
Mujhe ahsaas hai ki teri hansi mein ..
Hai chhupi meri hansi hai ! (more…)

Today wrote few lines just as part of jugalbandi…Hope can fit for someone to send as SMS. Nothing big in those lines but what all it shows that you should believe in your LOVE & should be firm in what you believe.

Kaifiyat mere ishq mein itni hai,
Door jaa jaaker bhi tuh laut k ayegi,
Nahi mitega mera saya tere ankho se,
Harr ashq mein tu apne mujhe hi payegi !!!

urdu Hindi love shayari

Lets discuss that when one can write a good poem?
–> When he is just sitting to write a poem as per the given need like an professional poet given an assignment.

or

–> When he is so much deep into emotion that all it turns in to words… ?
I feel, none of above can get best out of that poet. Let me tell how, for first case-when one has to write as per need, then can not write at it best because feelings are not really true in that & for second “when one is so much into emotions” then emotion get over the person so much, then I don’t think can really write effectively.
So when one can write at best ?
According to me when there is balanced mood ie. person is emotional and yes he has to write a poem then can give best out. How this works, well.. its that person starts writing as he has too, but as he gets into writing then emotions start taking over but can not take over whole as you were not really in emotional state.
So those were my views.
Today, I am thinking to try one, but I am not really in balanced mood, sometimes I find moving towards emotional side or sometimes I feel that I should write one.
Btw, thank you very much that you are still reading.

Mujhe kehna hai bohot, meri ek ankahi kahani hai,
Kaise mein kahu sab, mere lavz ab mujhse hi bemani hain !

Ek ek zarra jorkar maine socha ki kuch aaj kehdun..
Magar aisi zarre ki kafiyat jaise bair meri uski purani hai !

Fir poocha zindagi se tu kyun itni bebas khadi hai..
Ek qatra bahaya usne aansu,nahin bachi usme zindagi hai !
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