Kuch alfaaz zindagi ki ek maud par

April 19, 2011 at 12:17 pm 16 comments

Below I am just sharing two lines, there is not much to describe about them. These are just two lines, however if you read them then I expect you to say something about them or atleast what they convey to you!

Meri Zindagi par mera akhtiyaar naa raha,
Har mausam apne hi rang mein mujhe bighota gaya!

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Shayari paagalpan hai, shayari fitoor hai !

16 Comments Add your own

  • 1. Biswadash  |  June 18, 2011 at 7:07 am

    Mahi u r genious

    Reply
  • 2. mehul  |  June 29, 2011 at 1:16 pm

    i like it

    Reply
  • 3. shayari  |  July 30, 2011 at 3:48 pm

    that’s so good ji..

    Reply
  • 4. sukhdev  |  September 1, 2011 at 3:09 pm

    gud yaar

    Reply
  • 5. Kkp  |  September 17, 2011 at 5:48 pm

    Good night

    Reply
  • 6. riya  |  November 12, 2011 at 7:59 am

    hume aapka blog bahut pasand aaya , hum chahate hain aap aage bhi
    aise post karate rahenge ,
    thanks

    Reply
  • 7. Mahesh  |  November 26, 2011 at 6:04 am

    Mast Shayri. great bhai jaan

    Reply
  • 8. Diksha Mahajan  |  November 28, 2011 at 10:27 am

    Zindagi ki asli udaan abhi baaki hai,
    Zindagi ke kai imtihann abhi baaki hai.
    Abhi to napi hai muthi bhar zameen aapne,
    Aage abhi saara aasman baaki hai…………………….D

    Reply
  • 9. nitin pandit  |  January 8, 2012 at 6:14 am

    bahut umda likhte ho saab

    Reply
  • 10. Beerendra  |  March 6, 2012 at 2:11 pm

    I am very interested in your fantastic shyari

    Reply
  • 11. munna lal vishwakarma  |  March 7, 2012 at 2:44 pm

    afsos ki kale pe koi rang charhta nahin ,
    sab hanste gaye main rota gaya .

    Reply
  • 12. ikshayar  |  April 28, 2012 at 8:14 pm

    Thank you Riya, Deeksha, Berendra, Sukhdev and all others for admiring my words.

    Reply
  • 13. Mohammad faizan  |  July 4, 2012 at 12:03 pm

    ya rab shaheed ho jaun main bhi is watan ke liye.sirf tiranga hi mile bas mere kafan ke liye

    Reply
  • 14. shiv kumar sagar  |  August 14, 2012 at 10:30 am

    bilkul sahi kaha hai aapne mera hal bhi kuch esa hi hai,
    jb se mera pyar muj se juda hua hai tb se mera hal aesa hi ho jya hai jesa aap ne apni do panktiyo me bya kiya hai muje aesa lagta hai jese me jinda reha kr koi gunah kiye ja raha hu’
    mot mangta hu me khuda se rat din me mrta nahi or kmbhakt vo marta nahi,
    ya to tu muje mere pyar se mila de,
    ya gheri nind muj ko sula de,
    shiv kumar sagar,
    9808444746

    Reply
    • 15. ikshayar  |  June 10, 2013 at 9:57 am

      Itne dukhi hain aap toh apna number kyun diya hai yahan par ?

      Reply
  • 16. sonia  |  June 20, 2013 at 12:28 pm

    Kisne bheege hue baalon se ye jhatkaa pani,
    Jhoom ke aayi ghata toot ke barasa pani.
    Koi matawali ghata peeke jawani ki umang,
    Dil baha le gaya barsat ka pehala pani…

    Reply

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