Bharat Maa Tujhe Pranaam(Kavita Deshbhakti Ras mein)

August 15, 2007 at 6:38 pm 69 comments

I wanted to way something on Independence day but really never completed it. I wrote few lines but now only remembers to complete it. Its still Independence day so I am not really late.
This time, will try pure Hindi so outcome may not be so perfect.

So there is poem Devoted to Bharat Maa

Bharat Maa Tujhe Pranaam

O maa teri hum santaan
Tune jo diya hume ..
Teri har den k liye tujhe Pranaam

Teri hi goad humari palanhaar
Natmastak hum tere
Maa ki mamta apaar

O maa tujhse hai prarthna
Ek sur me hum fir bandhe
Gunje fir ekta ki garjana

Jaise pushp sare ek daal k wasi
ke antarman mein ho sada
deshprem ki bhawna aisi

Kartavya sae naa koi hathe pare
Desh hith desh samman hetu
Nagrik harr ek desh ka aage bare !!

Kare raksha, na bache koi vyatha
Bharat maa ke hridaya mile sukh
Har aur gunje bass yahi naveen gatha !!

Dharam Jati se upar
O maa ho akela tera hi naam..
Bharat maa tujhe pranaam !!

So that was the short simple Hindi Kavita, I wish to write more but seems I am already late and do not want to delay more. I hope readers are going to enjoy it.
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Mujhe hai ahsaas ki woh nahi hai! Mahatma Gandhi pe Hindi Kavita

69 Comments Add your own

  • 1. well wisher  |  September 17, 2007 at 11:25 am

    Very well said.. ikshayar ..its realy beautiful one.

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    • 2. SHREYA  |  November 29, 2009 at 2:12 pm

      VERY GOOD SAID

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  • 3. brijeshkhantwal  |  September 20, 2007 at 12:23 pm

    aapki kavita bahut acchi lagi Dhnyabad
    <a href=”http://anubhuti4ever.blogspot.com/”brij

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  • 4. ikshayar  |  September 22, 2007 at 8:07 am

    Hey
    thankyou Well wisher
    I have modified this poem a little .. hope now it better

    Thankyou Brijesh too!

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    • 5. devesh  |  August 27, 2011 at 7:24 am

      you are very mental

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  • 6. aparacit  |  January 14, 2008 at 4:00 pm

    hats of to you my friend

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  • 7. ikshayar  |  January 19, 2008 at 8:25 am

    Thankyou aparacit..

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  • 8. sandeep  |  February 8, 2008 at 8:49 pm

    good

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  • 9. ikshayar  |  February 8, 2008 at 10:08 pm

    Shukriya Sandeep !

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  • 10. TENSINGH.SAHU  |  June 4, 2008 at 5:10 am

    MAA TUJHE SALAM

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  • 11. Riddhi Iyer  |  June 13, 2008 at 7:20 pm

    I haven’t ever seen such a big devotee of our country India but I would just like to say that “KEEP IT UP FOR EVER AND EVER MORE”

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  • 12. CHARMI  |  June 22, 2008 at 6:33 pm

    wonderful…keep it up hamare desh mein maa tughe salaam kehne vaale bahut kum reh gaye hain par jo aisakehte hain vo khud salaam paane ke layak hotehain …

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  • 13. chirag  |  August 5, 2008 at 5:50 pm

    hi nice one dude.

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  • 14. Pramesh Maheshwari  |  August 9, 2008 at 1:44 pm

    After a long time, reading a true patriotic poem. Keep writing.

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  • 15. LEELADHAR RATHI  |  August 13, 2008 at 4:08 am

    aap ki kavita dil ko chhu gayee. aap se gujarish hai isi tarah se desh bhakati ka jajaba jagate raho…………………

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  • 16. namita  |  August 13, 2008 at 7:07 pm

    it;s relay nice and i inspirer with it and remember again my nation.
    THANKS

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  • 17. Gaurav  |  December 5, 2008 at 9:12 am

    Waqt Ane Par Bata Denge Tujhe Ae Asman
    Hum Abhi Se kya Bataye Kya Hamare Dil me hain.
    Thanks for the Poem

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  • 18. aparnaa  |  January 25, 2009 at 1:56 pm

    very nice….
    dil ko chhu gai

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  • 19. devender  |  January 25, 2009 at 4:12 pm

    fine pice of music drentched in patritism

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  • 20. naman sagar  |  April 16, 2009 at 8:42 am

    it’s nice

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  • 21. chitranshi  |  April 21, 2009 at 7:41 am

    good

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  • 22. chitranshi  |  April 21, 2009 at 7:41 am

    good fantastic

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  • 23. luv chandok  |  May 21, 2009 at 11:28 am

    it is really good i am realy impress so mera bharat mahan

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  • 24. suraj  |  September 16, 2009 at 4:18 pm

    its too boaring

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  • 25. brijmohan  |  September 30, 2009 at 8:34 am

    i am very good feel , when i read this poem.

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  • 26. brijmohan  |  September 30, 2009 at 8:35 am

    i am very good feel, when i read this poem.

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  • 27. kushal jha  |  September 30, 2009 at 11:14 am

    v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v.v. nice poem

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  • 28. nivedita  |  October 3, 2009 at 11:55 am

    I really liked the poem

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  • 29. tanya  |  November 2, 2009 at 1:36 pm

    its nice but must bve in hindi

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  • 30. bhuwan pathak  |  December 16, 2009 at 10:25 am

    muje bhaut pasand ayi aapaki kavita

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  • 31. shankar  |  January 4, 2010 at 2:27 pm

    bahut khoobsurat poem hai

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  • 32. dev  |  January 15, 2010 at 10:43 am

    tumhri poem acchi hai main apne bacche ko 26 january k liye yaad karai hai

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  • 33. ashu  |  January 16, 2010 at 1:23 pm

    asli deshbhakt………………..

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  • 34. vinay  |  January 21, 2010 at 1:50 pm

    appreciable

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  • 35. raj  |  January 21, 2010 at 3:23 pm

    good

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  • 36. shubham  |  January 22, 2010 at 11:11 am

    can you more kavita

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  • 37. ravi kumar mahawar  |  January 25, 2010 at 9:23 am

    Vande Mataram…….
    Jai Hind ……
    bahut badiya hai bhai…….

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  • 38. sk mishra  |  October 17, 2010 at 2:17 pm

    very nice poem

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  • 39. himanshu  |  November 25, 2010 at 10:07 am

    very beautyful poem

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  • 40. SAYSHANT  |  April 21, 2011 at 10:16 am

    hi!
    I read the poem was very beautiful.
    Jai hind
    vande mataram

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  • 41. SAYSHANT  |  April 21, 2011 at 10:20 am

    hi!
    Iread the poem the poem is very good.
    Jia Hind
    Vande Mataram

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  • 42. urvasi maurya  |  April 24, 2011 at 10:20 am

    gooooooooooooood kavita!!!! maa tujhe salaaam

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  • 43. yogita  |  May 8, 2011 at 7:38 am

    good job.
    i feel proud after reading it.

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  • 44. sarika razz  |  May 12, 2011 at 2:24 pm

    its osom mere priject mai fullto kaam aai……….thanxxxxx

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  • 45. manjiri patonkar  |  June 13, 2011 at 3:07 pm

    Ye ek manmohak kavita hai.

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    • 46. Praveen  |  May 23, 2012 at 8:57 am

      स व ट और क म प कट. नय और न र ल अ द ज़. एक अच छ ब त क प स ट पढन जर र ह कम ट स क ल ए. बह त बढ़ य लग प स ट क च न व भ अच छ लग . आपक म हनत ne प ठक क बह त suvidha prdaan क ह aapko बह त dher shubkamnayen. Rachana

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  • 47. shayari  |  August 7, 2011 at 6:36 am

    Bharat mata ki jai ho, bharat Mata zindabad….

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  • 48. gamasundlas  |  August 11, 2011 at 2:43 pm

    very very nice poetey

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  • 49. SAMEER 9992618120,9812912026  |  August 11, 2011 at 3:09 pm

    hi!
    Iread the poem the poem is very good.
    Jia Hind
    Vande Mataram

    Reply
  • 50. bhoomi  |  August 26, 2011 at 7:07 am

    lame……..

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  • 51. bhoomi  |  August 26, 2011 at 7:09 am

    so dumb …, i hav never read any other worse poem as this

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  • 52. srishty  |  September 2, 2011 at 1:08 am

    its nice but should be in hindi and small.

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  • 53. Deepak gadayana lalitpyr  |  September 9, 2011 at 5:45 pm

    vary good

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  • 54. Deepak gadayana lalitpyr  |  September 9, 2011 at 5:46 pm

    gar dekhana chahte ho meri udan ko,
    to jara our uncha karo aasman ko

    Reply
  • 55. Piyush  |  December 25, 2011 at 6:25 am

    Aadbhut

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  • 56. Abhishek  |  January 8, 2012 at 9:59 am

    very nice poem friend

    Reply
  • 57. akshita  |  April 8, 2012 at 7:20 am

    emotions…………..

    Reply
  • 58. sandy  |  April 25, 2012 at 11:22 am

    lovely poem anout our mother earth

    Reply
    • 59. sandy  |  April 25, 2012 at 11:23 am

      oops ! sry its about not anout

      Reply
  • 60. Mansi Singh  |  April 26, 2012 at 2:23 pm

    Very cooooooooool…….. poem.

    Reply
  • 61. megha  |  August 25, 2012 at 4:37 am

    this poem is really awesome… i lyk it…

    Reply
  • 62. ikshayar  |  November 7, 2012 at 8:17 am

    Thank you Megha ,Mansi , Sandy , Abhishek and all for nice words.

    Reply
  • 63. aditya  |  December 29, 2012 at 10:13 am

    very good poem.it will help me

    Reply
    • 64. aditya  |  December 29, 2012 at 10:16 am

      good boy

      Reply
  • 65. Riya sahgal  |  June 26, 2013 at 12:06 pm

    nice poem

    Reply
  • 66. Sameer Ranjan sahgal  |  June 26, 2013 at 12:09 pm

    very good poem. this poem is very helpful for me……………..

    Reply
  • 67. balvinder  |  July 1, 2013 at 1:34 pm

    kya khoob likha hai kisi shayar ne…

    vande matram.

    Reply
  • 68. saurabh jain  |  August 4, 2013 at 9:01 am

    i love this poem very much

    Reply
  • 69. Prateek Aggarwal  |  July 5, 2014 at 11:05 am

    wah kya baat hai

    Reply

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