mein ik Shayar. Sher o Shayari ka ikShayar

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• 1. himesh  |  August 26, 2007 at 5:48 pm

  yaar its great. you r brilliant poet and from ow i ur fan

• 2. ikshayar  |  August 26, 2007 at 7:43 pm

  Thankyou Himesh..
  You gave your time in reading this long poem..
  I am very much glad !

• 3. ankit  |  September 10, 2007 at 7:40 am

  nice work on shayarii keep it gys and send me some sad shayarii ok ……………

• 4. ikshayar  |  September 11, 2007 at 7:43 am

  Thankyou!

• 5. well wisher  |  September 18, 2007 at 3:52 am

  Suoerb…its realy superb. a feeling N reality of life.. well described.

• 6. ikshayar  |  September 22, 2007 at 8:12 am

  Shukriya.. I hv feeling that I know u

• 7. well wisher  |  September 24, 2007 at 5:09 am

  :-}

• 8. ikshayar  |  September 26, 2007 at 7:49 pm

  Ya.. I know you!!

• 9. well wisher  |  September 27, 2007 at 6:13 am

  :)

• 10. anshu  |  October 21, 2007 at 9:09 am

  excellent boss this touches the feeling

• 11. ikshayar  |  October 21, 2007 at 5:46 pm

  Thankyou Anshu !

• 12. Crossed 100,000 view mark&hellip  |  November 7, 2007 at 7:52 pm

  [...] wrote my longest poem also “Mujhe ahsaas hai ki woh nahi hai” . Reader like “Himesh” who said that after reading that poem he is my fan really [...]

• 13. Neha  |  November 14, 2007 at 8:32 am

  Fullan nu fadne to pehla, Kandeyan nu jarna v sikh lai !
  Eh zindagi vaat e kandeyan di, eyhe fullan di na bhaal kari,
  Eh agg da ikk dariya vehnda, tu agg vich tarna v sikh lai !
  J mout to tainu darr laggda eh ishq tere layi nahi baneya,
  Ishq mangda e khoon ashqan da ishq karn layi marna v sikh lai!!

• 14. hasan  |  December 11, 2007 at 11:24 am

  xellent..!!

• 15. ikshayar  |  December 14, 2007 at 7:29 am

  Thankyou Hasan

• 16. shahzad khan  |  December 19, 2007 at 7:06 pm

  iove

• 17. Jaanu  |  January 21, 2008 at 10:41 am

  YE KHOOB SURAT NAZRAANAA KISKA HAI ………

  Ye Insaan ki Surat me Karamaati Putla
  Pal Pal Bahakta, Machalta, Ucchalta
  Sarat kabhi to kabhi masti ka Aalam
  Phoolo sa khilta Mahakta Bachpan
  Khusboo se Chalakti Baali Umariya
  Tadpti, Machalti Jawaani ka Aalam
  Tootta hua Phir Budhape ka Daaman
  Ek Pal KO Sochoo Jara ………
  Ye Khoob Surat Nazarana kiska hai……..

  Kitne Rangoon me Paayi hai Fitrat Teri
  Kab Jaane tu Paalanhar banker Aaya
  Kisi Ke Sir Pe Tha woo Dulaara Hath,
  Kisi Ke Aanchal me Pyar Ki Khusbu,
  Kisi Ki Aankho main Chalakta jam Aaya
  Kismat Me Tha Jiski Bas woo hi Paya
  Ek Pal KO Sochoo Jara ………
  Ye Khoob Surat Nazarana kiska hai……..

  Jo Soota Hai Oonche Mahalo Mai
  Woo Makhmali Libaas me Simta…
  Chandan SA Badan WO Sise Si Kaya
  Ek WO Bhi Hai Jisne Kabhi ye Na Jana
  Ki Ye Hota hai Libaas kaisa,
  Kahate hai Kisko Aasiyaana
  Aur Bayan Kya Karu Uski Adaa KO
  Kafan se Bhi Jism KO Mahroom Paya
  Ek Pal KO Sochoo Jara ki………
  Ye Khoob Surat Nazarana kiska hai……..

• 18. .mayank  |  March 6, 2008 at 1:48 pm

  hey janu..its really great……keep it up dude…….i hope that i will read some more from u ……gud luk….

• 19. Ruchi  |  March 12, 2008 at 2:07 pm

  Ikshayar,aadab again..aj apki y long poem pyar ki sachai bayan kar gai,ki kai log na hoke bhi hote hai..keep it up..jiske lie likha hai apne..vo to ro padi hogi? Good nite

• 20. ikshayar  |  March 13, 2008 at 11:50 am

  Thankyou Ruchi for your kind words.

• 21. mani  |  March 28, 2008 at 9:47 am

  its so beautiful. a bit long but so emotional…
  I just was feeling dat way in dat mood ki ab yeh poem ne sari ki sari feelings biyaan kar di..
  I love it

  kepp it up… love to hear more…

  n thx for sharing

• 22. ikshayar  |  July 5, 2008 at 6:59 pm

  Thankyou Mani..

  It feels really good when people appreciate from heart.

• 23. ritu kankani  |  July 9, 2008 at 1:09 am

  awesome man…i thought i was the best 1 to write such a pretty sad part of lyf but realised that ya some 1 even feels the same….keep continuing with such a way ahead,all the best.!!!!!!!!!!!!

• 24. ikshayar  |  November 6, 2008 at 12:22 pm

  Shukriya Ritu!

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