Kahin mitti naa ho jaye (dard e dil : Poem on sad mood)

March 31, 2007 at 9:08 am 67 comments

I had written this poem when I was getting bored and so to utilize the time, I decided to write a poem on SAD theme.
This time, its about sadness of a heart who faced a lots of pain & now saying that it may be emotionless if it is going to be same always.

Here is the POEM:

Toot kar bhikhar naa jaye, yeh dil mera…
Kahin iske tukre naa ho jayen !!
Aur kitna ispe zulm barpega, yeh dil mera…
Kahin mitti naa ho jaye !!

Aur kitni inteha hogi,
Dede koi zeher ek hi baar isko !!
Aur nahin shaamil himmat,
Dede koi thandi chaanv hi mujhko !!

Kaise kahun ki kitna …
Dard isko hua hai !!
Khali hain lavz saare…
Itna inme damm kahan hai !!
Zaar zaar hoke bhi jiya hai !!
Kitna issne gham piya hai !!

Aur kitna Keher barpega, yeh dil mera…
Kahin patthar naa ho jaye !!
Phir jo mile bhi isko, naazuk chaanv …
Shayad kabhi samajh naa paye !!
…. ikShayar Kahin mitti naa ho jaye !!

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  • 1. Shikha  |  April 2, 2007 at 5:40 am

    This is Superb…. :) Liked it very much..

    Reply
  • 2. ikshayar  |  April 2, 2007 at 8:24 am

    Thank you Shikha for your appreciation.

    Reply
  • 3. ahsan  |  April 4, 2007 at 6:55 am

    ???????????????????? Love u so much

    Reply
  • 4. ikshayar  |  April 4, 2007 at 9:42 am

    Ahsaan.. is this love for me as appreciation or you remembered your loved one ?

    Thankx for appreciation

    Reply
  • 5. Nandan  |  April 29, 2007 at 4:43 am

    मेरा दिल तुम्हारी धङकन में धङकता है,

    फिर इजहार-ए-मुहब्बत की जरूरत क्या है ?

    जब खुदा मेहरबान है हमारे इश्क पर,

    तो जमाने को मनाने की जरूरत क्या है ?
    …………………………………..
    आज कितने दिनों बाद बूंदें गिरीं, ये बारिश नहीं, कोई रो रहा है ।

    तभी तो इतनी ठंडी हवा चल रही है, कोई दुखी मन से सो रहा है ।

    शोर मत मचाना, नहीं तो दर्द जाग डायेगा,

    और वो उसका प्यारा सा स्वप्न भी भाग जायेगा ।

    इन बूंदों से उसका दर्द कम हो रहा है ।

    तुम भी सो जाओ इस अहसास के साथ कि तुम्हारा दर्द तुम्हारे साथ सो रहा है ।
    …………………………………..
    कब मैं मैं से तुम हो गयी, तुम्हारी यादों में गुम हो गयी ।

    इस पर भी तुमने मेरी आरजू को न पहचाना, तुमने मुझे तुम नहीं आप ही जाना ।

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    • 6. minu  |  July 8, 2009 at 5:32 am

      i

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  • 7. ikshayar  |  April 29, 2007 at 6:04 pm

    Nandan ji.. If these are your creation then its really nice work :)

    Reply
  • 8. hema  |  May 2, 2007 at 11:03 am

    its too good and ur words r real,touch with any ones life.

    Reply
  • 9. FARZANA  |  May 4, 2007 at 7:59 pm

    its nice poetry site and i like v much poetry and near future want to develop my own site for poetry

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  • 10. ikshayar  |  May 6, 2007 at 1:03 pm

    Hema.. thnx..
    Farzana.. you can ask me for help.

    Reply
  • 11. Mubashir Hassan  |  July 22, 2007 at 8:29 pm

    THis Site must be a good runner because its

    always running in my mind,

    It must be a good thief because

    it has stolen my heart,

    and i am always a bad shooter

    because I Miss Surfing Always… ( Because of My Office Work )

    Reply
  • 12. ikshayar  |  July 23, 2007 at 5:01 pm

    Hassan ji..
    Kya kahen hum aage :)

    Reply
  • 13. Uzair  |  July 28, 2007 at 4:03 pm

    Very good shayeri !!!

    Reply
  • 14. ikshayar  |  July 29, 2007 at 11:22 am

    Shukriya UZair!

    Reply
  • 15. amit  |  September 3, 2007 at 1:44 am

    i like itbvery much

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  • 16. ikshayar  |  September 6, 2007 at 3:38 pm

    Thankyou Amit :)

    Reply
  • 17. well wisher  |  September 25, 2007 at 8:13 am

    seriously! its realy a mind blowing creation by u… amazing.. seriouly i m becoming ur poetry fan..

    plz always do write lyk this.. love to read ur shayries & poetries..

    Gud luck

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  • 18. ikshayar  |  September 26, 2007 at 7:45 pm

    Hi Well wisher..
    Thankyou for our comments full of encouragement.

    Still same question, do I know you ?

    Reply
  • 19. vikas  |  September 28, 2007 at 8:13 pm

    i liked it vrey much

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  • 20. ikshayar  |  September 29, 2007 at 11:15 am

    Thankyou Vikas !

    Reply
  • 21. hemant pandey  |  October 6, 2007 at 3:16 pm

    aaj bus dil mein yehi baat aati hai ,yeh unki gali hai,.ki umra bhar ki dosti mujhko ab yaad aati rok do mere janaje krok do mere janaje ko o

    Reply
  • 22. vineet  |  December 3, 2007 at 8:11 am

    its was really gud n very inspiring

    Reply
  • 23. ikshayar  |  December 4, 2007 at 12:39 pm

    Thankyou!

    Reply
  • 24. Shikha  |  January 5, 2008 at 5:20 am

    nice one :)

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  • 25. rabia saeeee  |  January 23, 2008 at 5:32 pm

    actualy i like poetry and i also write it but …………never is jesa to kabi likh hi ni sakti……………very welllllllllllllllll

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  • 26. rabia saeeee  |  January 23, 2008 at 5:35 pm

    will u write another one for me jis ka topic ho ”’aik ladki”’

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  • 27. ikshayar  |  January 25, 2008 at 11:48 pm

    Thankyou Rabia for your appreciating word.
    You can write on your own.. “Aik ladki” and show us here.

    Reply
  • 28. KHUSHI  |  May 14, 2008 at 11:46 am

    UR POETRY IS HEART TOUCHING…ITS REALLY SUPERB.

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  • 29. sahar bharati  |  June 21, 2008 at 6:43 pm

    to,
    ikshayar
    agar main kuch likhoon to aap bura na maaniye..
    aap ki shayari bahut achi hai..bas kuch mashwara(advise) hai..aap ki shayari aur achi ho jaaye gi..

    Aur kitna zulm barpe ga yeh dil mera…
    Aur kitna Keher barpega, yeh dil mera…

    (yahaan, zulm barpe ga aur doosri line mei keher bhugthe ga ho to zyada theek ho ga.)

    zaar zaar hoke bhi jiya hai
    (yahaan zar zar hoke nahee, zar zar ro ke likhiye)

    Aur kitni inteha hogi,
    Dede koi zeher ek hi baar isko !!
    Aur nahin shaamil himmat,
    Dede koi thandi chaanv hi mujhko !!
    (yahaan
    jab aap ne dil ko zeher dene ki baat kahi to us ke baad thandi chanv ki bajaaye ye hota to acha hota ki
    amrut ka zikr hota…)
    aap ko meri baat theek lagay to thnx..na lagay to maaf kardena

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  • 30. ikshayar  |  June 30, 2008 at 7:41 am

    I am glad that you took time and suggested the modification.

    If you feel that suggestions by you can make it better then I feel you may not be wrong but whatever you suggested will make it a different poem.

    For instance,
    Zaar zaar hoke bhi jiya hai !!
    Kitna issne gham piya hai !!

    but what you suggest will change its meaning, similarly, Aur kitna Keher barpega and aur kitna zulm parpega can’t be used together as again they will change the way this poem is written.

    In the last :
    Aur kitni inteha hogi,
    Dede koi zeher ek hi baar isko !!
    Aur nahin shaamil himmat,
    Dede koi thandi chaanv hi mujhko !!

    Here, I talked about Zeher, but in next line I am talking about “Thandi Chaanv”, it is asking for peace, which is antonyms already for zeher in poetic manner so explicitly mentioninnig amrit is not really required.

    Thankyou, your comments are always valuable.

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  • 31. Amit  |  July 9, 2008 at 9:15 am

    Great Poem. Now i am in same phase of my love life. if i use this poem as written by me, will u mind?
    Any way nice depiction of emotions. Congrats

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  • 32. Devesh  |  September 25, 2008 at 5:22 pm

    Greate, Greate….
    really touching the emotions….

    इस जग में साथी किसको ख़बर है
    कौन अधूरा है किसके बिना
    किसी की कमी से जग सारा सूना
    सारा जीवन रह जाता है सूना ।
    हँसते हुए ख्वाब रोते है आंशूं
    कोई ना समझे है दिल जुंबा
    इस जग में साथी किसको ख़बर है
    कौन अधूरा है किसके बिना ।

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  • 33. mann  |  October 23, 2008 at 6:35 pm

    kya baat hai….. wah wah

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  • 34. prasant sethi  |  November 25, 2008 at 8:11 pm

    your poem is too good.. its realy heart touching..

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  • 35. priti  |  December 4, 2008 at 8:18 am

    fantastic….
    m sick to comment ..very beautiful

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  • 36. ashish  |  December 6, 2008 at 6:27 am

    chand lafjo me jo bayan kiya tumne
    laga youn ki dil khol ker rakh diya tumne.

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  • 37. bharat  |  December 12, 2008 at 12:20 pm

    is jahan main sabhi adhure hain , jo accha lage use dekho jaroor ,jaise bhi mile chain paao , koi kise ka intjar nahin karta

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  • 38. VIPIN  |  December 27, 2008 at 2:02 pm

    great yaar………really……

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  • 39. shivani punjabi  |  December 29, 2008 at 9:42 pm

    toote dil ka dard ek bedard kya jaane yeh jindagi kitni khudgarj ise khuda kya jaane

    its really a nice poem.

    Reply
  • 40. Shafqat  |  December 30, 2008 at 5:18 pm

    Nice shayari.

    Reply
  • 41. ikshayar  |  January 21, 2009 at 6:13 pm

    I am very thankful to all those who came here and gave their valuable comments.

    Reply
  • 42. zara  |  February 9, 2009 at 2:01 pm

    tutey dil ko lagana humey acha nahi lagta,,
    kisi ko palkon pe betha kar girana humey acha nai lagta,,
    ek baar yeh keh diya ,, hum to sirf ap k hain
    lekin,,,,baar baar humein ye batana acha nai lagta….

    such a nice poetryyyy….

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  • 43. SHISHIR KUMAR  |  April 29, 2009 at 3:44 pm

    its really a nice poem.
    If u hav any more pls send me.
    thaks.

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  • 44. narendra agrawal  |  July 5, 2009 at 3:21 pm

    Mai likh to nahi sakta par smajh sakta hu.bahut achhi lagi mujhe.kuy ki dard ko samjhne ke liye dard ki jarurat hoti hai…

    Reply
  • 45. neha  |  September 27, 2009 at 1:39 pm

    very nice n touching poems

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  • 46. NADIYA  |  October 30, 2009 at 9:49 am

    Hi,
    could you translate your beautiful poem to English language please?

    Reply
  • 47. sonia  |  March 14, 2010 at 5:25 am

    Do give your valuable comments and suggestions

    Reply
    • 48. Awesh!  |  September 23, 2010 at 7:54 pm

      very nice,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,few person understand the poetry…………pyar kiya ho to vhi samje thk se ,,,,,,,,,,,,,but very good…………

      Reply
  • 49. Mishaal  |  April 20, 2010 at 3:44 pm

    Its nice poetry..

    mind if i know ur name

    aap kab se likh rahay/rahi hain???

    Reply
  • 50. subodh kumar  |  October 4, 2010 at 3:58 pm

    it is excel. dude, i like too much, really it’s toucheable to heart.

    ur rockkkk

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    • 51. ikshayar  |  October 6, 2010 at 4:32 pm

      Thank you Subodh for your nice word !

      Reply
  • 52. Shona  |  October 7, 2010 at 5:37 pm

    Its great dude…bahut acha likha hai. .

    Reply
  • 53. ishant  |  April 1, 2011 at 4:51 pm

    mast lagi mujhe to

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  • 54. dipendra  |  June 2, 2011 at 11:45 am

    hume intjar hai aapke new verson ka

    Reply
  • 55. Mak  |  February 13, 2012 at 5:12 pm

    so lovely……..

    Reply
  • 56. Apar Narula  |  March 26, 2012 at 11:11 am

    Jiski pasand or napasand ka itna khayal kiya humne…

    Aj whe kehte ha bhul jao hume ek yad ki tareh…

    Reply
  • 57. Sapna  |  April 28, 2012 at 9:16 am

    I m glad aftr reading ur poetry.
    I like it very much..

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  • 58. ikshayar  |  April 28, 2012 at 8:26 pm

    Thank you all for such words and admiration.

    Reply
  • 59. prachi  |  September 2, 2012 at 6:15 pm

    o its really really nice..mere paas words nhi h apki tarif k liye..bs apki poem padkar lga maano kisine meri zindgi ki book open kr di ho..u dng a good wrk..pls continue..gud luck~~~~

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    • 60. Anil  |  March 13, 2013 at 8:19 am

      Esi prachi ki halt h wo meri you are febolas

      Reply
  • 61. ikshayar  |  November 7, 2012 at 8:09 am

    Thank you Prachi, Infact comments from people like you are reason to continue here. :

    Reply
  • 62. S. Rizwan Abid Gilani  |  January 11, 2013 at 2:21 pm

    M sry 2 say k itni khas b ni h ap ki p0etry jtna ap smj ry h0, itna hi kahun ga v. blw avg

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  • 63. Arvind  |  January 20, 2013 at 5:26 pm

    E game raat jara dhire dhire chal, mujhe gam mein aur dub jane de, chot dil pe lagi h saja ankho.n ko sunane de.

    Reply
  • 64. Manish Kapoor  |  February 23, 2013 at 5:33 am

    mujhe apki poem bhut achchhi lgi apki poem me eak sachcha ahsas h.. thanks

    Reply
  • 65. thakur  |  March 4, 2013 at 1:01 am

    This is the real phase i m living.
    It’s totaly go wid my present lyf
    bhot dard mila h pyar me aj bhi unse gujarish krte h laut aau is dil me…
    Vry nyc bro bot bdhiya shayari h

    Reply
  • 66. Krishna  |  November 8, 2013 at 6:02 pm

    Very nice yaar
    from- krishna

    Reply
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