छूट चुकी है रेलःहिन्दी कविताः(Hindi kavita-shayari)-Wahi Khamoshi Chaayi hai
March 6, 2007
Title of my poems are usually long like movies of Karan Johar 
. But actually I want it to be descriptive as much as possible and also it will be good in for readers to decide to go for it or not though I want people to read my all poem and give their reviews as well suggestions on it.
निम्नलिखित कविता को आगे हिन्दी (देवनागरी) में भी लिखुगां|
So inspiration of this poem is like this..
I had not much chance to travel through railways but recently, I had to drop one of my known one to a railway station, In India its usual in delay of trains and hence this train was on platform for half hour opposed to its 10 mins expected stay. I was talking to that person for half and it was a not so busy station, more over it was late night then.
Everything was crowded & lots of movements because of that but once it left platform…
My poem is all about that ..
Jaa chuke hain sab aur wahi khamoshi chaayi hai,
Pasara hain har oar sannata, tanhai muskurai hai..Chhoot chuki hai rail,
Chand lamho ki toh baat thi,kya raunak thi yahaan,
Jaisi Saji koi mehfil khaas thi!!Ajnabi thae chehre saare,
Phir bhi unse mulaaqaat thi..Bheji thi kisi ne apnayiyat,
Salam mein woh kya baat thi..Ek pal thae aap Jaise Kausar,
Ab bachi akeli raat thi…Chalo ab laut chale yahan sae,
chhoot chuki hai rail
Yeh ab guzari baat thi…Urte kaghaz,karte bayan,
Inki bhi kisi sae ,
do pal pehle kuch baat thi…Barr chale kadam,
kanare un pateriyon
kahani jinke roz ye saath thi…Phir aayegi dooji rail,
phir cheeregi ye sannnata,
jaise zindagi sae phir mulaqat thi…phir luatenge aur ,
bhari kadmo sae, jaise
koi gehri see baat thi.Chhoot chuki hai rail,
Ab sirf kaali syaha raat thi.
अब इसी कविता को देवनागरी में लिखा गया है
जा चुके है सब और वही खामोशी छायी है,
पसरा है हर ओर सन्नाटा, तन्हाई मुस्कुराई है,छूट चुकी है रेल ,
चंद लम्हों की तो बात थी,क्या रौनक थी यहॉं,
जैसे सजी कोई महफिल खास थी,अजनबी थे चेहरे सारे,
फिर भी उनसे मुलाक़ात थी,भेजी थी किसी ने अपनाइयत,
सलाम मे वो क्या बात थी,एक पल थे आप जैसे क़ौसर,
अब बची अकेली रात थी,चलो अब लौट चलें यहॉं से,
छूट चुकी है रेल
ये अब गुज़री बात थी,उङते काग़ज़, करते बयान्,
इनकी भी किसी से
दो पल पहले मुलाक़ात थी,बढ़ चले क़दम,
कनारे उन पटरियों
कहानी जिनके रोज़ ये साथ थी,फिर आएगी दूजी रेल,
फिर चीरेगी ये सन्नाटा
जैसे जिन्दगी से फिर मुलाक़ात थी,फिर लौटेंगे और,
भारी क़दमों से,जैसे
कोई गहरी सी बात थी,छूट चुकी है रेल,
अब सिर्फ काली स्याहा रात थी |
I hope you will like my hardword .
~ikShayar
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1.
Satpathy | April 23, 2007 at 3:30 am
Too gud .. These are very good words …
2.
rupesh Bhong | April 23, 2007 at 9:45 am
vey nice
3.
dharmendra | April 24, 2007 at 8:05 am
उङते काग़ज़, करते बयान्,
इनकी भी किसी से
दो पल पहले मुलाक़ात थी,
बढ़ चले क़दम,
कनारे उन पटरियों
कहानी जिनके रोज़ ये साथ थी,
फिर आएगी दूजी रेल,
फिर चीरेगी ये सन्नाटा
जैसे जिन्दगी से फिर मुलाक़ात थी,
फिर लौटेंगे और,
भारी क़दमों से,जैसे
कोई गहरी सी बात थी,
छूट चुकी है रेल,
अब सिर्फ काली स्याहा रात थी |
4.
dharmendra | April 24, 2007 at 8:17 am
मुझे इंतेज़ार है, कब पूरा होगा
कम्बख्त पङोस से जो महक आती है
प्यास को और बढ़ाती है
जाने कब ये इंतेजांर पूरा होगा
मालूम है,कुछ लम्हात ही जानिब मेरे होगा
लेकिन भूख अब हर पल और बहकाती है
बुझेगी जल्दी ही पर आस और जगाती है
और अब ये इंतज्रार पूरा होगा
मुझे अब जाना होगा,खाना जो शुरु होगा
देखुं तो वहां जाकर कि क्या नज़र होगा
मुझे इंतज्रार है, अब पूरा होगा
5.
shiv kumar | April 25, 2007 at 9:36 am
hi
6.
ikshayar | April 25, 2007 at 6:37 pm
Thankx..
Its one of my favourite poem too..
Dharmendra ji.. agar aap kuch kehte toh aur bhi accha lagta !
7.
Vickram | May 5, 2007 at 1:12 am
aap log hindi fonts mein kaisa lik-rahey ho???
8.
niraj upadhyay | May 5, 2007 at 10:49 am
nice poems , i am very much empress to your poems. i think i will find something through your poems.
lage raho.
9.
ikshayar | May 6, 2007 at 1:11 pm
Thankyou very much Niraj
Vikram , we are using Unicode to type Hindi.
You can see this guide here :
Hindi Typing using unicode
10.
hari prasad | May 18, 2007 at 7:21 am
verry good kavita thanks to wright
11.
ikshayar | May 19, 2007 at 5:37 pm
Thank Hari ji ..
जो आपने सुवचन कहे हमारे लिखे कथनों पर |
12.
madhu | August 3, 2007 at 9:13 am
verry good kavita thanks to wright
13.
madhu | August 3, 2007 at 9:14 am
nice poems , i am very much empress to your poems. i think i will find something through your poems.
lage raho.
14.
ikshayar | August 3, 2007 at 4:16 pm
Something like ?
15.
leena | August 23, 2007 at 5:32 am
kindly write a kavita on maa showingmothers love for her child. This is a kind request please write soon as possible as i need this for my daughter who is in class four.
16.
hina | September 11, 2007 at 10:25 am
hello aap ki shayri sach main bahut achi h
17.
ikshayar | September 11, 2007 at 7:17 pm
Leena, I am sorry that I couldn’t fulfill ur request. I am not a professional writer so it all depends upon mood for the poem I write.
Hina, I am greatful for your praising .
18.
brijeshkhantwal | September 20, 2007 at 12:20 pm
उङते काग़ज़, करते बयान्,
इनकी भी किसी से
दो पल पहले मुलाक़ात थी,
बढ़ चले क़दम,
कनारे उन पटरियों
कहानी जिनके रोज़ ये साथ थी,
फिर आएगी दूजी रेल,
फिर चीरेगी ये सन्नाटा
जैसे जिन्दगी से फिर मुलाक़ात थी,
IMughe yeh pankitayn bahut acchi lagi.
Dhnyabad likne ke liye
< a href=”http://anubhuti4ever.blogspot.com/”brij
19.
ikshayar | October 5, 2007 at 4:54 am
Shukriya Brajesh !
20.
raj | October 19, 2007 at 1:32 pm
hi
21.
shashi | October 24, 2007 at 2:16 pm
it wonderful poem
22.
ikshayar | October 26, 2007 at 7:30 pm
Thankyou Shashi
23.
Ajay Bramhe | October 30, 2007 at 5:29 am
कम्बख्त पङोस से जो महक आती है
प्यास को और बढ़ाती है
I liked the poems very much…
wishes…
24.
ikshayar | October 30, 2007 at 7:35 am
Thankyou Ajay !
25.
Hukam Chand | December 24, 2007 at 5:58 am
Bahut hi achchi kavita hai. Bahut badiya, lajavab, hakitat lagati hai. aap to professional KAVI lagate. Eak din aap ka Nam hoga.
26.
ikshayar | December 25, 2007 at 8:05 pm
Shukriya Mr. Hukan chand.. those are nice words of appreciation.
27.
.mayank | March 6, 2008 at 1:55 pm
najar bachakar …
najar se dekhta hun….
tum bura na maan jao , ,,,bade dar se dekhta hun….
jab bhi dekhta hun tumhe….
tum roj nayi lagti ho…isliye main tumhe phir se dekhta hun…..
magar aaj tumhari najron ki kitaab se padha …..
shayad tum sochti ho ki main buri najar se dekhta hun…..
…………
28.
manish | May 7, 2008 at 8:18 am
thank you!