छूट चुकी है रेलःहिन्दी कविताः(Hindi kavita-shayari)-Wahi Khamoshi Chaayi hai
March 6, 2007
Title of my poems are usually long like movies of Karan Johar 
. But actually I want it to be descriptive as much as possible and also it will be good in for readers to decide to go for it or not though I want people to read my all poem and give their reviews as well suggestions on it.
निम्नलिखित कविता को आगे हिन्दी (देवनागरी) में भी लिखुगां|
So inspiration of this poem is like this..
I had not much chance to travel through railways but recently, I had to drop one of my known one to a railway station, In India its usual in delay of trains and hence this train was on platform for half hour opposed to its 10 mins expected stay. I was talking to that person for half and it was a not so busy station, more over it was late night then.
Everything was crowded & lots of movements because of that but once it left platform…
My poem is all about that ..
Jaa chuke hain sab aur wahi khamoshi chaayi hai,
Pasara hain har oar sannata, tanhai muskurai hai..Chhoot chuki hai rail,
Chand lamho ki toh baat thi,kya raunak thi yahaan,
Jaisi Saji koi mehfil khaas thi!!Ajnabi thae chehre saare,
Phir bhi unse mulaaqaat thi..Bheji thi kisi ne apnayiyat,
Salam mein woh kya baat thi..Ek pal thae aap Jaise Kausar,
Ab bachi akeli raat thi…Chalo ab laut chale yahan sae,
chhoot chuki hai rail
Yeh ab guzari baat thi…Urte kaghaz,karte bayan,
Inki bhi kisi sae ,
do pal pehle kuch baat thi…Barr chale kadam,
kanare un pateriyon
kahani jinke roz ye saath thi…Phir aayegi dooji rail,
phir cheeregi ye sannnata,
jaise zindagi sae phir mulaqat thi…phir luatenge aur ,
bhari kadmo sae, jaise
koi gehri see baat thi.Chhoot chuki hai rail,
Ab sirf kaali syaha raat thi.
अब इसी कविता को देवनागरी में लिखा गया है
जा चुके है सब और वही खामोशी छायी है,
पसरा है हर ओर सन्नाटा, तन्हाई मुस्कुराई है,छूट चुकी है रेल ,
चंद लम्हों की तो बात थी,क्या रौनक थी यहॉं,
जैसे सजी कोई महफिल खास थी,अजनबी थे चेहरे सारे,
फिर भी उनसे मुलाक़ात थी,भेजी थी किसी ने अपनाइयत,
सलाम मे वो क्या बात थी,एक पल थे आप जैसे क़ौसर,
अब बची अकेली रात थी,चलो अब लौट चलें यहॉं से,
छूट चुकी है रेल
ये अब गुज़री बात थी,उङते काग़ज़, करते बयान्,
इनकी भी किसी से
दो पल पहले मुलाक़ात थी,बढ़ चले क़दम,
कनारे उन पटरियों
कहानी जिनके रोज़ ये साथ थी,फिर आएगी दूजी रेल,
फिर चीरेगी ये सन्नाटा
जैसे जिन्दगी से फिर मुलाक़ात थी,फिर लौटेंगे और,
भारी क़दमों से,जैसे
कोई गहरी सी बात थी,छूट चुकी है रेल,
अब सिर्फ काली स्याहा रात थी |
I hope you will like my hardword .
~ikShayar
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1.
Satpathy | April 23, 2007 at 3:30 am
Too gud .. These are very good words …
2.
rupesh Bhong | April 23, 2007 at 9:45 am
vey nice
3.
dharmendra | April 24, 2007 at 8:05 am
उङते काग़ज़, करते बयान्,
इनकी भी किसी से
दो पल पहले मुलाक़ात थी,
बढ़ चले क़दम,
कनारे उन पटरियों
कहानी जिनके रोज़ ये साथ थी,
फिर आएगी दूजी रेल,
फिर चीरेगी ये सन्नाटा
जैसे जिन्दगी से फिर मुलाक़ात थी,
फिर लौटेंगे और,
भारी क़दमों से,जैसे
कोई गहरी सी बात थी,
छूट चुकी है रेल,
अब सिर्फ काली स्याहा रात थी |
4.
dharmendra | April 24, 2007 at 8:17 am
मुझे इंतेज़ार है, कब पूरा होगा
कम्बख्त पङोस से जो महक आती है
प्यास को और बढ़ाती है
जाने कब ये इंतेजांर पूरा होगा
मालूम है,कुछ लम्हात ही जानिब मेरे होगा
लेकिन भूख अब हर पल और बहकाती है
बुझेगी जल्दी ही पर आस और जगाती है
और अब ये इंतज्रार पूरा होगा
मुझे अब जाना होगा,खाना जो शुरु होगा
देखुं तो वहां जाकर कि क्या नज़र होगा
मुझे इंतज्रार है, अब पूरा होगा
5.
komal meshram | October 28, 2009 at 3:54 pm
bahuth aca hai
6.
shiv kumar | April 25, 2007 at 9:36 am
hi
7.
ikshayar | April 25, 2007 at 6:37 pm
Thankx..
Its one of my favourite poem too..
Dharmendra ji.. agar aap kuch kehte toh aur bhi accha lagta !
8.
Vickram | May 5, 2007 at 1:12 am
aap log hindi fonts mein kaisa lik-rahey ho???
9.
niraj upadhyay | May 5, 2007 at 10:49 am
nice poems , i am very much empress to your poems. i think i will find something through your poems.
lage raho.
10.
ikshayar | May 6, 2007 at 1:11 pm
Thankyou very much Niraj
Vikram , we are using Unicode to type Hindi.
You can see this guide here :
Hindi Typing using unicode
11.
hari prasad | May 18, 2007 at 7:21 am
verry good kavita thanks to wright
12.
ikshayar | May 19, 2007 at 5:37 pm
Thank Hari ji ..
जो आपने सुवचन कहे हमारे लिखे कथनों पर |
13.
madhu | August 3, 2007 at 9:13 am
verry good kavita thanks to wright
14.
madhu | August 3, 2007 at 9:14 am
nice poems , i am very much empress to your poems. i think i will find something through your poems.
lage raho.
15.
ikshayar | August 3, 2007 at 4:16 pm
Something like ?
16.
leena | August 23, 2007 at 5:32 am
kindly write a kavita on maa showingmothers love for her child. This is a kind request please write soon as possible as i need this for my daughter who is in class four.
17.
hina | September 11, 2007 at 10:25 am
hello aap ki shayri sach main bahut achi h
18.
ikshayar | September 11, 2007 at 7:17 pm
Leena, I am sorry that I couldn’t fulfill ur request. I am not a professional writer so it all depends upon mood for the poem I write.
Hina, I am greatful for your praising .
19.
brijeshkhantwal | September 20, 2007 at 12:20 pm
उङते काग़ज़, करते बयान्,
इनकी भी किसी से
दो पल पहले मुलाक़ात थी,
बढ़ चले क़दम,
कनारे उन पटरियों
कहानी जिनके रोज़ ये साथ थी,
फिर आएगी दूजी रेल,
फिर चीरेगी ये सन्नाटा
जैसे जिन्दगी से फिर मुलाक़ात थी,
IMughe yeh pankitayn bahut acchi lagi.
Dhnyabad likne ke liye
< a href=”http://anubhuti4ever.blogspot.com/”brij
20.
ikshayar | October 5, 2007 at 4:54 am
Shukriya Brajesh !
21.
raj | October 19, 2007 at 1:32 pm
hi
22.
shashi | October 24, 2007 at 2:16 pm
it wonderful poem
23.
ikshayar | October 26, 2007 at 7:30 pm
Thankyou Shashi
24.
Ajay Bramhe | October 30, 2007 at 5:29 am
कम्बख्त पङोस से जो महक आती है
प्यास को और बढ़ाती है
I liked the poems very much…
wishes…
25.
ikshayar | October 30, 2007 at 7:35 am
Thankyou Ajay !
26.
Hukam Chand | December 24, 2007 at 5:58 am
Bahut hi achchi kavita hai. Bahut badiya, lajavab, hakitat lagati hai. aap to professional KAVI lagate. Eak din aap ka Nam hoga.
27.
ikshayar | December 25, 2007 at 8:05 pm
Shukriya Mr. Hukan chand.. those are nice words of appreciation.
28.
.mayank | March 6, 2008 at 1:55 pm
najar bachakar …
najar se dekhta hun….
tum bura na maan jao , ,,,bade dar se dekhta hun….
jab bhi dekhta hun tumhe….
tum roj nayi lagti ho…isliye main tumhe phir se dekhta hun…..
magar aaj tumhari najron ki kitaab se padha …..
shayad tum sochti ho ki main buri najar se dekhta hun…..
…………
29.
manish | May 7, 2008 at 8:18 am
thank you!
30.
maruti | May 23, 2008 at 10:18 am
very nice poem
31.
Rahul Natthani | June 8, 2008 at 11:58 am
Bahut badhiya hai
32.
Sameer Rawool | June 24, 2008 at 4:56 pm
So so nice, My mother tongue is not Hindi, But I like Hindi poems… These poems are so fine to read
33.
vijay rengar | June 29, 2008 at 7:50 pm
your poem is great sir
34.
ravi | July 4, 2008 at 8:10 am
very very nice poem
35.
kammo | July 4, 2008 at 8:20 am
very nice poem
36.
kammo | July 4, 2008 at 8:21 am
I like this poem
37.
Dinesh | July 7, 2008 at 11:20 am
hi, bhaut acchi kavita hai..
38.
Mnaisha | August 19, 2008 at 3:00 am
Very nice poem.
aap ek achi kosshish kar rahe hai. kavita hamesh dil se nikalti hai aur jab man main ye khyal ajaye ki kuch likhna hai to shabd khud b khud samne a jate hai.
Thanks
Manisha
39.
prem prakash prem | August 21, 2008 at 2:28 pm
hi!
kya kahu,
kuch kahne ko ji chahta hai,
kah du ki kavita khubsurat hai,
chlo kah diya…
really great one…
prem prakash prem
40.
Deepak snakhala | September 2, 2008 at 4:49 am
I think it is very Nice peom bY nice and Simple person .Thank’s for contribute your writing in HINDI WORLD”
41.
pappy verma | September 12, 2008 at 7:42 am
bahut hi shandar
42.
Devesh | September 28, 2008 at 4:43 pm
Really its a nice poem…
I love this poem because its beauty..
43.
manish soni | October 2, 2008 at 9:19 am
DIL KO CHOO GAYI APKI KAVITAYE
44.
ramesh ahluwalia | October 13, 2008 at 1:20 pm
great…..pl. continue
45.
vk mishra. | January 15, 2009 at 12:40 pm
duniaya ek station hai jahan pe bhi sanatta hoga.
aaney walaya jo aayehan hai unehen bhi to jana hoga.
46.
AMARNATH MANSI | February 28, 2009 at 5:07 am
Aaaki kawita hme bahut achchha laga ,so sweet
47.
vikash gupta | May 16, 2009 at 11:41 am
sir
very nice
48.
vikash gupta | May 16, 2009 at 11:41 am
very nice sir
49.
vishal | May 18, 2009 at 12:06 pm
mast h……….
50.
pooja | June 1, 2009 at 1:02 pm
hi very good shayri aap ke shayri aacha he o k
51.
shikha singh | June 18, 2009 at 6:19 am
I liked this kavita very much
52.
pravin | June 23, 2009 at 9:20 am
hi, how r u?
53.
mishu | June 23, 2009 at 12:55 pm
bahut khoob kafi efforts kiy hain ki sab padh saken do-do leepiyon me likh kar
54.
satyajeet | July 8, 2009 at 2:35 pm
Kaha te hai sub….
Kya hoga Abb..
Kuch ki-jiye mere Raab…..
Dosti ki kagar me ,abb ho gayi hai love…..
Peheredar to bahut hai , kya pata miljaye koi kab…………
55.
priyanka pathak | July 12, 2009 at 7:08 pm
i like your poems.. please write something more for us…………
thank you very much//////
56.
satyajeet | July 16, 2009 at 4:39 am
पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
रुकना जिन्दगी नहीं , आ मेरे साथ चल.
हाथ मेरे थाम ले तू ,जायेगा किस्मत बदल.
पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
रोज बदल्ती दुनिया में ,कौन जाने क्या होगा कल.
दुनिया की इस भरी मेहफिल में , तेरा भी है कुछ रोल.
पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
छुटे जो साथ मेरा तो,रह जायोगे हाथ मल्.
पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
रुकना जिन्दगी नहीं , आ मेरे साथ चल.
57.
sushil rai | July 24, 2009 at 5:12 pm
bahoot khoob sir..! kavita logicaly kafi jiwant lagti hai aur sachai ko najadik se bayan krti hai..! main v kabhi -kabhi kavita likhkar apni pyash bujha leta hoon..! jiwan ek chalti railgadi ki tarah hai jisme bachpan, jawani aur budhapa 3 most plateform aate hain ..1mritu hi jiski manjil hai..!
58.
shikhar | July 25, 2009 at 2:05 am
words r less for your poem……….
59.
ritu | July 29, 2009 at 8:57 am
i likevery much oll your kavita
60.
jeetendra kumar | August 8, 2009 at 7:22 am
kavita
61.
Sanjay | August 13, 2009 at 12:35 pm
bhaut hi sunder
62.
Sanjay | August 13, 2009 at 12:37 pm
hi best
63.
rachana gupta | August 18, 2009 at 4:25 pm
i like the kavita please write a poem for my child .he is in class3. on hayas kavita
64.
Chetan Kumar | September 10, 2009 at 11:08 am
all kavita please
65.
Chetan Kumar | September 10, 2009 at 11:08 am
all kavita
66.
anju | November 4, 2009 at 11:39 am
hiiiiiiiiiii kavitayen bahut achhi hai