छूट चुकी है रेलःहिन्दी कविताः(Hindi kavita-shayari)-Wahi Khamoshi Chaayi hai

March 6, 2007 at 10:44 am 134 comments

Title of my poems are usually long like movies of Karan Johar :) . But actually I want it to be descriptive as much as possible and also it will be good in for readers to decide to go for it or not though I want people to read my all poem and give their reviews as well suggestions on it.

निम्नलिखित कविता को आगे हिन्दी (देवनागरी) में भी लिखुगां|

So inspiration of this poem is like this..
I had not much chance to travel through railways but recently, I had to drop one of my known one to a railway station, In India its usual in delay of trains and hence this train was on platform for half hour opposed to its 10 mins expected stay. I was talking to that person for half and it was a not so busy station, more over it was late night then.
Everything was crowded & lots of movements because of that but once it left platform…

My poem is all about that ..

Jaa chuke hain sab aur wahi khamoshi chaayi hai,
Pasara hain har oar sannata, tanhai muskurai hai..

Chhoot chuki hai rail,
Chand lamho ki toh baat thi,

kya raunak thi yahaan,
Jaisi Saji koi mehfil khaas thi!!

Ajnabi thae chehre saare,
Phir bhi unse mulaaqaat thi..

Bheji thi kisi ne apnayiyat,
Salam mein woh kya baat thi..

Ek pal thae aap Jaise Kausar,
Ab bachi akeli raat thi…

Chalo ab laut chale yahan sae,
chhoot chuki hai rail
Yeh ab guzari baat thi…

Urte kaghaz,karte bayan,
Inki bhi kisi sae ,
do pal pehle kuch baat thi…

Barr chale kadam,
kanare un pateriyon
kahani jinke roz ye saath thi…

Phir aayegi dooji rail,
phir cheeregi ye sannnata,
jaise zindagi sae phir mulaqat thi…

phir luatenge aur ,
bhari kadmo sae, jaise
koi gehri see baat thi.

Chhoot chuki hai rail,
Ab sirf kaali syaha raat thi.

अब इसी कविता को देवनागरी में लिखा गया है

जा चुके है सब और वही खामोशी छायी है,
पसरा है हर ओर सन्नाटा, तन्हाई मुस्कुराई है,

छूट चुकी है रेल ,
चंद लम्हों की तो बात थी,

क्या रौनक थी यहॉं,
जैसे सजी कोई महफिल खास थी,

अजनबी थे चेहरे सारे,
फिर भी उनसे मुलाक़ात थी,

भेजी थी किसी ने अपनाइयत,
सलाम मे वो क्या बात थी,

एक पल थे आप जैसे क़ौसर,
अब बची अकेली रात थी,

चलो अब लौट चलें यहॉं से,
छूट चुकी है रेल
ये अब गुज़री बात थी,

उङते काग़ज़, करते बयान्‍,
इनकी भी किसी से
दो पल पहले मुलाक़ात थी,

बढ़ चले क़दम,
कनारे उन पटरियों
कहानी जिनके रोज़ ये साथ थी,

फिर आएगी दूजी रेल,
फिर चीरेगी ये सन्नाटा
जैसे जिन्दगी से फिर मुलाक़ात थी,

फिर लौटेंगे और,
भारी क़दमों से,जैसे
कोई गहरी सी बात थी,

छूट चुकी है रेल,
अब सिर्फ काली स्याहा रात थी |

I hope you will like my hardword .

~ikShayar

Prakrati shayari Husn

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  • 1. Satpathy  |  April 23, 2007 at 3:30 am

    Too gud .. These are very good words …

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  • 2. rupesh Bhong  |  April 23, 2007 at 9:45 am

    vey nice

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  • 3. dharmendra  |  April 24, 2007 at 8:05 am

    उङते काग़ज़, करते बयान्‍,
    इनकी भी किसी से
    दो पल पहले मुलाक़ात थी,

    बढ़ चले क़दम,
    कनारे उन पटरियों
    कहानी जिनके रोज़ ये साथ थी,

    फिर आएगी दूजी रेल,
    फिर चीरेगी ये सन्नाटा
    जैसे जिन्दगी से फिर मुलाक़ात थी,

    फिर लौटेंगे और,
    भारी क़दमों से,जैसे
    कोई गहरी सी बात थी,

    छूट चुकी है रेल,
    अब सिर्फ काली स्याहा रात थी |

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    • 4. sidhika  |  June 14, 2011 at 4:55 am

      i am shock ki itni bekar kavita koi kaise likh sakta ha

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      • 5. srikant singh  |  August 29, 2011 at 10:09 am

        bekar poem nahi tum ho.chi chi

      • 6. Gurpreet singh  |  February 12, 2012 at 8:40 am

        Sidhika ji,
        Ak good kavita.man ko touch kar gai.

      • 7. Gurpreet singh  |  February 12, 2012 at 8:45 am

        Sidhika ji.
        Kavita realy good h.

    • 8. Gurpreet singh  |  February 12, 2012 at 8:42 am

      Realy a good kavita

      Reply
  • 9. dharmendra  |  April 24, 2007 at 8:17 am

    मुझे इंतेज़ार है, कब पूरा होगा
    कम्बख्त पङोस से जो महक आती है
    प्यास को और बढ़ाती है
    जाने कब ये इंतेजांर पूरा होगा

    मालूम है,कुछ लम्हात ही जानिब मेरे होगा
    लेकिन भूख अब हर पल और बहकाती है
    बुझेगी जल्दी ही पर आस और जगाती है
    और अब ये इंतज्रार पूरा होगा

    मुझे अब जाना होगा,खाना जो शुरु होगा
    देखुं तो वहां जाकर कि क्या नज़र होगा
    मुझे इंतज्रार है, अब पूरा होगा

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    • 10. komal meshram  |  October 28, 2009 at 3:54 pm

      bahuth aca hai

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  • 11. shiv kumar  |  April 25, 2007 at 9:36 am

    hi

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  • 12. ikshayar  |  April 25, 2007 at 6:37 pm

    Thankx..

    Its one of my favourite poem too..

    Dharmendra ji.. agar aap kuch kehte toh aur bhi accha lagta !

    Reply
  • 13. Vickram  |  May 5, 2007 at 1:12 am

    aap log hindi fonts mein kaisa lik-rahey ho???

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    • 14. RISHI GOEL  |  February 2, 2010 at 12:34 pm

      nice poem . please keep on writing more as

      YOU ARE THE BEST!!!!!

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      • 15. santosh kumar  |  May 11, 2011 at 8:14 pm

        kindly write a kavita on maa showingmothers love for her child. This is a kind request please write soon as possible as i need this for my daughter who is in class four.

  • 16. niraj upadhyay  |  May 5, 2007 at 10:49 am

    nice poems , i am very much empress to your poems. i think i will find something through your poems.
    lage raho.

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  • 17. ikshayar  |  May 6, 2007 at 1:11 pm

    Thankyou very much Niraj :)
    Vikram , we are using Unicode to type Hindi.
    You can see this guide here :
    Hindi Typing using unicode

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  • 18. hari prasad  |  May 18, 2007 at 7:21 am

    verry good kavita thanks to wright

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  • 19. ikshayar  |  May 19, 2007 at 5:37 pm

    Thank Hari ji ..
    जो आपने सुवचन कहे हमारे लिखे कथनों पर |

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  • 20. madhu  |  August 3, 2007 at 9:13 am

    verry good kavita thanks to wright

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  • 21. madhu  |  August 3, 2007 at 9:14 am

    nice poems , i am very much empress to your poems. i think i will find something through your poems.
    lage raho.

    Reply
  • 22. ikshayar  |  August 3, 2007 at 4:16 pm

    Something like ?

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  • 23. leena  |  August 23, 2007 at 5:32 am

    kindly write a kavita on maa showingmothers love for her child. This is a kind request please write soon as possible as i need this for my daughter who is in class four.

    Reply
  • 24. hina  |  September 11, 2007 at 10:25 am

    hello aap ki shayri sach main bahut achi h

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  • 25. ikshayar  |  September 11, 2007 at 7:17 pm

    Leena, I am sorry that I couldn’t fulfill ur request. I am not a professional writer so it all depends upon mood for the poem I write.

    Hina, I am greatful for your praising .

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  • 26. brijeshkhantwal  |  September 20, 2007 at 12:20 pm

    उङते काग़ज़, करते बयान्‍,
    इनकी भी किसी से
    दो पल पहले मुलाक़ात थी,

    बढ़ चले क़दम,
    कनारे उन पटरियों
    कहानी जिनके रोज़ ये साथ थी,

    फिर आएगी दूजी रेल,
    फिर चीरेगी ये सन्नाटा
    जैसे जिन्दगी से फिर मुलाक़ात थी,

    IMughe yeh pankitayn bahut acchi lagi.
    Dhnyabad likne ke liye
    < a href=”http://anubhuti4ever.blogspot.com/”brij

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    • 27. Himanshu  |  November 18, 2011 at 2:35 pm

      very nice

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  • 28. ikshayar  |  October 5, 2007 at 4:54 am

    Shukriya Brajesh !

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  • 29. raj  |  October 19, 2007 at 1:32 pm

    hi

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  • 30. shashi  |  October 24, 2007 at 2:16 pm

    it wonderful poem

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  • 31. ikshayar  |  October 26, 2007 at 7:30 pm

    Thankyou Shashi :)

    Reply
  • 32. Ajay Bramhe  |  October 30, 2007 at 5:29 am

    कम्बख्त पङोस से जो महक आती है
    प्यास को और बढ़ाती है

    I liked the poems very much…

    wishes…

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  • 33. ikshayar  |  October 30, 2007 at 7:35 am

    Thankyou Ajay !

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  • 34. Hukam Chand  |  December 24, 2007 at 5:58 am

    Bahut hi achchi kavita hai. Bahut badiya, lajavab, hakitat lagati hai. aap to professional KAVI lagate. Eak din aap ka Nam hoga.

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  • 35. ikshayar  |  December 25, 2007 at 8:05 pm

    Shukriya Mr. Hukan chand.. those are nice words of appreciation.

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  • 36. .mayank  |  March 6, 2008 at 1:55 pm

    najar bachakar …
    najar se dekhta hun….
    tum bura na maan jao , ,,,bade dar se dekhta hun….
    jab bhi dekhta hun tumhe….
    tum roj nayi lagti ho…isliye main tumhe phir se dekhta hun…..
    magar aaj tumhari najron ki kitaab se padha …..
    shayad tum sochti ho ki main buri najar se dekhta hun…..
    …………

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    • 37. mayuri hedau  |  March 14, 2011 at 10:19 am

      i liked it very much sir………nice…@

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  • 38. manish  |  May 7, 2008 at 8:18 am

    thank you!

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  • 39. maruti  |  May 23, 2008 at 10:18 am

    very nice poem

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  • 40. Rahul Natthani  |  June 8, 2008 at 11:58 am

    Bahut badhiya hai

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  • 41. Sameer Rawool  |  June 24, 2008 at 4:56 pm

    So so nice, My mother tongue is not Hindi, But I like Hindi poems… These poems are so fine to read

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  • 42. vijay rengar  |  June 29, 2008 at 7:50 pm

    your poem is great sir

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  • 43. ravi  |  July 4, 2008 at 8:10 am

    very very nice poem

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  • 44. kammo  |  July 4, 2008 at 8:20 am

    very nice poem

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  • 45. kammo  |  July 4, 2008 at 8:21 am

    I like this poem

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  • 46. Dinesh  |  July 7, 2008 at 11:20 am

    hi, bhaut acchi kavita hai..

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    • 47. suraj  |  December 11, 2010 at 4:40 pm

      very nice

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  • 48. Mnaisha  |  August 19, 2008 at 3:00 am

    Very nice poem.
    aap ek achi kosshish kar rahe hai. kavita hamesh dil se nikalti hai aur jab man main ye khyal ajaye ki kuch likhna hai to shabd khud b khud samne a jate hai.

    Thanks
    Manisha

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  • 49. prem prakash prem  |  August 21, 2008 at 2:28 pm

    hi!
    kya kahu,
    kuch kahne ko ji chahta hai,
    kah du ki kavita khubsurat hai,
    chlo kah diya…
    really great one…
    prem prakash prem

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  • 50. Deepak snakhala  |  September 2, 2008 at 4:49 am

    I think it is very Nice peom bY nice and Simple person .Thank’s for contribute your writing in HINDI WORLD”

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  • 51. pappy verma  |  September 12, 2008 at 7:42 am

    bahut hi shandar

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  • 52. Devesh  |  September 28, 2008 at 4:43 pm

    Really its a nice poem…
    I love this poem because its beauty..

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  • 53. manish soni  |  October 2, 2008 at 9:19 am

    DIL KO CHOO GAYI APKI KAVITAYE

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  • 54. ramesh ahluwalia  |  October 13, 2008 at 1:20 pm

    great…..pl. continue

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  • 55. vk mishra.  |  January 15, 2009 at 12:40 pm

    duniaya ek station hai jahan pe bhi sanatta hoga.
    aaney walaya jo aayehan hai unehen bhi to jana hoga.

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  • 56. AMARNATH MANSI  |  February 28, 2009 at 5:07 am

    Aaaki kawita hme bahut achchha laga ,so sweet

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  • 57. vikash gupta  |  May 16, 2009 at 11:41 am

    sir

    very nice

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  • 58. vikash gupta  |  May 16, 2009 at 11:41 am

    very nice sir

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  • 59. vishal  |  May 18, 2009 at 12:06 pm

    mast h……….

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  • 60. pooja  |  June 1, 2009 at 1:02 pm

    hi very good shayri aap ke shayri aacha he o k

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  • 61. shikha singh  |  June 18, 2009 at 6:19 am

    I liked this kavita very much

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  • 62. pravin  |  June 23, 2009 at 9:20 am

    hi, how r u?

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  • 63. mishu  |  June 23, 2009 at 12:55 pm

    bahut khoob kafi efforts kiy hain ki sab padh saken do-do leepiyon me likh kar

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  • 64. satyajeet  |  July 8, 2009 at 2:35 pm

    Kaha te hai sub….
    Kya hoga Abb..
    Kuch ki-jiye mere Raab…..
    Dosti ki kagar me ,abb ho gayi hai love…..
    Peheredar to bahut hai , kya pata miljaye koi kab…………

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  • 65. priyanka pathak  |  July 12, 2009 at 7:08 pm

    i like your poems.. please write something more for us…………
    thank you very much//////

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  • 66. satyajeet  |  July 16, 2009 at 4:39 am

    पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
    रुकना जिन्दगी नहीं , आ मेरे साथ चल.
    हाथ मेरे थाम ले तू ,जायेगा किस्मत बदल.
    पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
    रोज बदल्ती दुनिया में ,कौन जाने क्या होगा कल.
    दुनिया की इस भरी मेहफिल में , तेरा भी है कुछ रोल.
    पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
    छुटे जो साथ मेरा तो,रह जायोगे हाथ मल्.

    पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
    रुकना जिन्दगी नहीं , आ मेरे साथ चल.

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    • 67. mahendra kothari  |  March 24, 2010 at 8:32 pm

      aapki kavita bahut achhi hai,aur koi achhi kavita ho to bhejiye

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  • 68. sushil rai  |  July 24, 2009 at 5:12 pm

    bahoot khoob sir..! kavita logicaly kafi jiwant lagti hai aur sachai ko najadik se bayan krti hai..! main v kabhi -kabhi kavita likhkar apni pyash bujha leta hoon..! jiwan ek chalti railgadi ki tarah hai jisme bachpan, jawani aur budhapa 3 most plateform aate hain ..1mritu hi jiski manjil hai..!

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  • 69. shikhar  |  July 25, 2009 at 2:05 am

    words r less for your poem……….

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  • 70. ritu  |  July 29, 2009 at 8:57 am

    i likevery much oll your kavita

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  • 71. jeetendra kumar  |  August 8, 2009 at 7:22 am

    kavita

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  • 72. Sanjay  |  August 13, 2009 at 12:35 pm

    bhaut hi sunder

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  • 73. Sanjay  |  August 13, 2009 at 12:37 pm

    hi best

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  • 74. rachana gupta  |  August 18, 2009 at 4:25 pm

    i like the kavita please write a poem for my child .he is in class3. on hayas kavita

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  • 75. Chetan Kumar  |  September 10, 2009 at 11:08 am

    all kavita please

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  • 76. Chetan Kumar  |  September 10, 2009 at 11:08 am

    all kavita

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  • 77. anju  |  November 4, 2009 at 11:39 am

    hiiiiiiiiiii kavitayen bahut achhi hai

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  • 78. madhu Tyagi  |  November 11, 2009 at 2:01 pm

    Aap bahut achha likhte hai

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    • 79. parwez  |  March 28, 2012 at 7:07 am

      hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

      bahut khubsurat kawita hai

      apke kawita parh kar bahut khush huye……ap ka kawita parh kar bahut hi enjoi aayee.

      thanking you

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  • 80. ganesh  |  December 2, 2009 at 11:07 am

    thas great
    plese enter apdf files another any person copy your files poem

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  • 81. vinod verma  |  December 16, 2009 at 3:22 pm

    bahut kubsoorat kavita hai. eeshwar kare apke shabdo me aur aapki soch me din-pr-din tarakki ho. aur mujhe isi terh dil ko chu jane wali kavitaye padhne ko mile.

    jab tare khikhilakar chand se kilkor kare,
    to us raat tera dil sanam se milne ki dua kare .
    jab bhi uthe tera hath khuda ki bandji me,
    bas apne sanam ki salamati ki dua kare .

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    • 82. surendra singh  |  June 15, 2011 at 11:18 am

      kya khub kaita hai …………….

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    • 83. parwez  |  March 28, 2012 at 7:10 am

      bahut hi khubsurat kavita hai.

      khush amdid

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  • 84. ravi  |  February 3, 2010 at 8:32 am

    nice poem
    its a heart touching poem

    keep writing

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  • 85. rav  |  February 4, 2010 at 12:29 pm

    very nice

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  • 86. chandani  |  April 7, 2010 at 1:51 pm

    all these poems are best I want all these

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  • 87. vikas saini  |  May 13, 2010 at 6:56 am

    kya baat h,
    aapko dekhnee se pta chala, hamara jivan bhi kuch khaas h.

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  • 88. Mohit Sharma  |  September 28, 2010 at 11:39 am

    Very Nice

    I Love This Shayari

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  • 89. CHANDRA  |  October 7, 2010 at 9:12 am

    very nice line

    keep itup

    god bless you….

    Reply
  • 90. rana  |  October 25, 2010 at 4:55 pm

    it nice

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  • 91. Sanjay nishad  |  November 20, 2010 at 3:06 am

    Jindgi ek raat hai usme na jane kitne khuab hai. Jo mill gay wo apna hai aur toot gaya wo sapna hai.

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  • 92. suraj  |  December 11, 2010 at 4:38 pm

    i am the in the world

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  • 93. suraj  |  December 11, 2010 at 4:39 pm

    i am the best in the world

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    • 94. suraj  |  December 11, 2010 at 4:39 pm

      you are a lalu

      Reply
  • 95. SUNIL PAWAR  |  January 26, 2011 at 1:30 pm

    Aaj Kal Hum Bhi Humare Lobjo se Fijayo me Phool bekher dete hai ki aaj kal hum bhi humare lobjo se fijayo me phool bekher dete hai na jaane kon si gli se niklega mera janaja ye soch kar sabhi galiyo me thode thode apne haatho se phool bekher dete hai

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  • 96. SUNIL PAWAR  |  January 26, 2011 at 1:36 pm

    Bekuf Bekhabr na jaane ye baccha kha ja raha hai ki bekuf bekhabar na jaane ya baccha kha ja raha hai pal bhr ke liye he shai hume apna bachpan yaad aa rha hai.

    Reply
  • 97. om gupta  |  February 1, 2011 at 12:42 pm

    very nice poem dear frnd pls write somthing for me i m waiting for ur early responce thanks yar

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  • 98. abhinav  |  February 17, 2011 at 12:32 pm

    your poems are outstanding. sachi meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

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  • 99. ABHISHEK KUMAR.  |  February 17, 2011 at 12:38 pm

    TERE POEMS TO JHAKASH HOTE HAIN YAR………………………………………………..

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  • 100. ABHA KUMARI  |  February 17, 2011 at 12:40 pm

    KYA LIKHA HAI.

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  • 101. AMARENDRA KUMAR.  |  February 17, 2011 at 12:42 pm

    TERE POEM TO MAHAN HAIN,
    HIRE KE SAMAN HAIN.

    Reply
  • 102. reena  |  February 18, 2011 at 10:14 am

    पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
    रुकना जिन्दगी नहीं , आ मेरे साथ चल.
    हाथ मेरे थाम ले तू ,जायेगा किस्मत बदल.
    पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
    रोज बदल्ती दुनिया में ,कौन जाने क्या होगा कल.
    दुनिया की इस भरी मेहफिल में , तेरा भी है कुछ रोल.
    पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
    छुटे जो साथ मेरा तो,रह जायोगे हाथ मल्.

    पल पल हर पल कहता है ये पल .
    रुकना जिन्दगी नहीं , आ मेरे साथ चल.

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    • 103. ankur pandit  |  April 5, 2011 at 11:43 pm

      kahne ko sabd nahi hai….

      Reply
    • 104. satyajeet  |  October 24, 2012 at 5:02 pm

      copied…….

      Reply
  • 105. reena  |  February 18, 2011 at 10:15 am

    उङते काग़ज़, करते बयान्‍,
    इनकी भी किसी से
    दो पल पहले मुलाक़ात थी,

    बढ़ चले क़दम,
    कनारे उन पटरियों
    कहानी जिनके रोज़ ये साथ थी,

    फिर आएगी दूजी रेल,
    फिर चीरेगी ये सन्नाटा
    जैसे जिन्दगी से फिर मुलाक़ात थी,

    Reply
  • 106. Chakrant Mothsara  |  March 23, 2011 at 9:23 am

    Aankho ko band karoge to hame hi dekhoge ankhe khologe to hame hi paoge
    zindagi me kabhi rona mat warna ansuo me hame hi gawaoge

    Reply
  • 107. Rahul singh negi  |  May 2, 2011 at 11:29 am

    yar owesome,i really like it,
    carry on bro.

    Reply
  • 108. ajim  |  May 19, 2011 at 3:56 am

    hi

    Reply
  • 109. rana  |  May 20, 2011 at 8:39 am

    sabash……………… beta ………………………..tumhe to baba ramdev ke sath hona chahie……………..

    Reply
  • 110. Anil chaudhary 9368656309  |  May 23, 2011 at 2:50 pm

    hi very nice

    Reply
  • 111. sandhya jaiswal  |  May 26, 2011 at 2:15 pm

    aaj yu laga jaise zindagi se mulakat ho gayi…….
    na chahte huye v dil ko kisi ki yaad aagayi…..
    aapki gazalo ka kuch yu huaa asar……….
    mujhse milne meri zindagi aagayi………

    Reply
  • 112. deepak  |  June 11, 2011 at 6:47 pm

    bahut shandar

    Reply
  • 113. dpkoswal6@gmail.com  |  June 11, 2011 at 6:48 pm

    +

    Reply
  • 114. sidhika  |  June 14, 2011 at 4:57 am

    it is the best

    Reply
  • 115. nikhil  |  June 14, 2011 at 12:11 pm

    ye jindagi choti si hai
    par badi mushkil si hai
    is jindagi mai kamyab bano tum
    na ese bathe raho tum
    ye jindagi choti si hai

    Reply
  • 116. vikas  |  June 14, 2011 at 3:46 pm

    absolutely beautiful…
    thx 4 sharing..dhyani ji

    Reply
  • 117. faiz  |  June 19, 2011 at 5:11 pm

    very nice

    Reply
  • 118. nitin  |  July 21, 2011 at 10:04 am

    bnjsm

    Reply
  • 119. manu  |  July 26, 2011 at 5:47 am

    nice and touchy

    Reply
  • 120. ashwini  |  July 27, 2011 at 12:23 pm

    mast hai yaa

    Reply
  • 121. narendra  |  August 3, 2011 at 12:48 pm

    wah yaar mja aa gya aisa hmne kbhi socha bhi nhi tha

    Reply
  • 122. praveenpal  |  September 1, 2011 at 9:57 am

    very bad

    Reply
  • 123. Lavanish Paliwal  |  September 1, 2011 at 1:00 pm

    Beautiful

    Reply
  • 124. Tarkeshwar Ram  |  September 4, 2011 at 10:51 am

    प्रकाश ध्यानी जी आपका गब्बर सिंह का चरित्र चित्रण लाजवाब है

    Reply
  • 125. Gurpreet singh  |  February 12, 2012 at 9:04 am

    Jb jb mai hota hu udas
    tb tb yaad aate h vo hseen pal jo tumhare sath bite the.
    Tb hontho brbs aa jati h ak snigdh muskan,
    tum sath nhi ho par tumhari yaad sine se lagi rahti h,
    jo deti h hr dukh mai ak madhur santvna.
    =Gurpreet singh.

    Reply
  • 126. Deepak Jaiswal  |  February 24, 2012 at 10:26 am

    Apno se haare hain dekho kahi kuchh
    Muqaddar me WO likhna bhool to nahi gaya…………………..

    Reply
  • 127. Ghanshyam Singh.  |  March 8, 2012 at 10:52 am

    kabil-e-tarif.

    Reply
  • 128. ravinder sugara  |  June 18, 2012 at 9:01 am

    ravi and richa

    Reply
  • 129. ravinder sugara  |  June 18, 2012 at 9:03 am

    i love only my girl friende

    Reply
  • 130. Kapil Dev  |  June 29, 2012 at 8:29 pm

    उङते काग़ज़, करते बयान्‍,
    इनकी भी किसी से
    दो पल पहले मुलाक़ात थी,

    बढ़ चले क़दम,
    कनारे उन पटरियों
    कहानी जिनके रोज़ ये साथ थी,

    फिर आएगी दूजी रेल,
    फिर चीरेगी ये सन्नाटा
    जैसे जिन्दगी से फिर मुलाक़ात थी,

    फिर लौटेंगे और,
    भारी क़दमों से,जैसे
    कोई गहरी सी बात थी,

    छूट चुकी है रेल,
    अब सिर्फ काली स्याहा रात थी |

    Reply
  • 131. surender arya  |  July 5, 2012 at 6:31 am

    bahut sunder……. main ese share kar rha hu

    Reply
  • 132. Rakeshsanel  |  August 7, 2012 at 5:05 pm

    Very good

    Reply
  • 133. satyajeet  |  September 1, 2012 at 8:13 pm

    चाहत से चाहता था तुम्हे.
    तुमने चाहत को रुस्बा किया

    दिल से दिल की बात हमारी
    क्यूँ , तेरे दिल ने यकिन किया

    आँखों से आँखें मिलते नहीं अब
    आंखे चुराती हे तू…

    इसकजादे से ईस्क नहीं थी, अगर
    ईस्क किया था क्यूँ……???

    ईस्क किया था क्यूँ……???

    Reply
  • 134. sweety  |  December 13, 2012 at 10:20 am

    very nice and awesome …………………………………………..

    Reply

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