Mera bharat dukhi hai (shayari deshbhakti)
February 12, 2007
Kyun aaj mein dukhi hun,
Mujhe gham kiska sata raha hai.
Uss mor par jo andhra chaya hai,
Kyun mujhe woh daraa raha hai
Kyun unchayiyana mere mulk ki,
Mujhe khokhli dikhai de rahi hain,
Kyun woh jo gehra ander sama raha hai
Woh hai meri zami ka dil
Jo aaj dukh mana raha hai,
Noch rahe hai zamane wale,
Har ek apna jeevan sawar raha hai
Mere mulk ka kya hoga ae jan..
Mera bharat dukhi hai , dukh mana raha hai.
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1.
नयन सिंह | February 14, 2007 at 4:16 pm
बहुत अच्छा लिखा है।
आप आसानी हिंदी में लिख सकते हैं, सहायता के लिये यहां देखें
http://www.etalkindia.com/using_hindi_on_internet_in_windows_xp_hindi_typewriter_layout_tutorial-t278.0.html
2.
hiren4u | February 17, 2007 at 4:51 am
hi
desh par likhne ke liye shukriya dost
3.
dev chaudhary | June 25, 2007 at 12:20 pm
really nice friend… acha lagta hai jub koi es desh ki halat ke bare me sochta hai…..really great…..this india need again fighters like azad, bhagat
4.
ikshayar | June 25, 2007 at 1:44 pm
Thank you Dev, I we need people who are loyal to country !
5.
Teji | June 30, 2007 at 11:40 am
pad aur ek baar muh se lafz niklay,
sarfaroshi ki tamanna ab hamaarey dil mein hai
dekhna hai jor kitna baazuvay katil mein hain
aaj ki azaadi, ye khuli hawa…un logo ki hi to den hain
good work
6.
ikshayar | June 30, 2007 at 1:44 pm
Thankyou Teji Saheb !
7.
Avinash giri | July 16, 2007 at 8:19 am
Dost tum jaise logo ki jitne taarif ki jaay utni kam hai, Aaj kai is yug mai tum jaise bahut kam hai mai khud bhi apnai desh kai baarai mai soachnai or liknai kai liye time nahi dai pata but dost kabhi mulakaat ka moka millai to jarror milna
MAA TUJHE SALAAM
8.
ikshayar | July 17, 2007 at 10:05 am
That was really a nice commment..
Shukriya . ..
9.
vikash rai | August 10, 2007 at 11:38 am
That was really a nice deshbhakti comment
10.
swati kurundwadkar | August 13, 2007 at 4:41 pm
bahut acchai kavita hai…..
door rahakar desh ke dard ko jyada acche se samajh sakate hai
11.
govind | August 14, 2007 at 12:20 pm
ka be toko aur kuchh likhe ke na ba
12.
ikshayar | August 14, 2007 at 5:35 pm
ok sure.. aur bhi kuch likha jaye.. soon will do !
13.
Gulab | August 15, 2007 at 11:11 am
har dil me ek tammana jarur hoti hai,
har dil me ek khawais jarur hoti hai,
mumkin nahi har dil kurbaan jaye is desh par,
lekin har dil me kurbaan hone ki lagan jarur hoti hai.
14.
ikshayar | August 15, 2007 at 6:17 pm
achha kaha Gulab Ji
Thankyou for posting here.
15.
vikram rampal | September 21, 2007 at 7:04 am
achcha hain
16.
ikshayar | September 22, 2007 at 8:13 am
Mr. Vikram,
it is was actually one of my initial try. .
17.
Jitesh | September 27, 2007 at 9:21 am
Jiyo Yaar!!!!
Sahi Me Mera Desh Dukhi Hai.
18.
ikshayar | September 28, 2007 at 6:27 pm
Lets do something for it
19.
zunaira | January 10, 2008 at 10:52 am
‘Boht nice poetry hay pharh kar boht accha lagta hay fantestic poetry beautiful poetry’
20.
ikshayar | January 19, 2008 at 8:23 am
Thankyou Zunaira !
21.
sandeep | February 8, 2008 at 8:42 pm
aab bhi samay he…..
ab bhi samay he ….yudhbhumime apna zohar dikhlao
ab bhi samay he yudhbhumi,apna zohar dikhlao.
Ugrwat sahit dushman ko, ab mittme me dafnao………..
Mukt karo kashmir ko ab,
mukt karo kashmir ko ab,,, in papi paki hatyaro se,
Desh ko bhi ab mukt kijie chupe hue gaddro se;;;;;;]
22.
pravin bhosale | March 21, 2008 at 1:52 pm
Kurbani ka jajba to har dilo me hai
loot jane ki tammana to har yuva me hai
lekin pahle tum pahle tum me yeh bimari bhi hamame hai
JAI HIND JAI BHARAT *****VANDE MATRAM*********
23.
komal | May 21, 2008 at 1:30 pm
nice poem.!
24.
Simran | June 12, 2008 at 3:39 am
really really nice poem.can u write one more poem but that poem is on time please.
25.
Riddhi Iyer | June 13, 2008 at 7:30 pm
FANTASTIC poem and write more of them.
26.
nandini | July 6, 2008 at 10:14 am
can u write some more poems on deshbhakti?????????
27.
ikshayar | July 7, 2008 at 11:32 am
Sure I can but now a days I am writing nothing new!
28.
N | July 12, 2008 at 3:09 pm
Nice one, keep more subject oriented sense in your poetry and flow of words as well…
Waiting for some excellent work.
Regards
- N
29.
Vikas Singh | August 9, 2008 at 6:36 am
Nice..Quotes..Well Thanks for Writing.
I;m also saying something…
Maar De Dhakka To tut Jaye Pakka,
Jawani Use Kahte Hain,
Mar Mite Jo Shahid-e-watan Ke liye,
Kurbaani Usse Kahte hain…….!!!!!
JAI HIND..!!!!!
30.
Deepak kumar | August 14, 2008 at 11:24 am
quie marto ho dulahan a laya marana ha batan a liya
mar jayo ga hosan ke basti me to chanda na daya kafahan ka liya
31.
Sameer | August 15, 2008 at 4:05 am
Hi i am sameer, happy independence day to every budy. So waht we all are doing today not thinking abt over counntry. just when this independence day will come that time only we will think about india i am write na. but it’s not correct. wht we are doing to our country. just do it some thing for india.. ok this i have many thoughts in my mind but how to present i am not getting. ok byee. happy indepenence day once again.
32.
vinay | September 11, 2008 at 4:48 pm
sare jahan se achha hindostan hamara
loves you
33.
vinay | September 11, 2008 at 4:49 pm
good
34.
Dr. Amit Agarwal | November 15, 2008 at 9:54 am
Friend, you have written very well. Your words will inspire the youth of our country.
Well done and please keep it up.