Comments on: Mera bharat dukhi hai (shayari deshbhakti)

By: Dr. Amit Agarwal

Dr. Amit Agarwal — Sat, 15 Nov 2008 09:54:13 +0000

Friend, you have written very well. Your words will inspire the youth of our country.
Well done and please keep it up.

By: vinay

vinay — Thu, 11 Sep 2008 16:49:45 +0000

good

By: vinay

vinay — Thu, 11 Sep 2008 16:48:44 +0000

sare jahan se achha hindostan hamara

loves you

By: Sameer

Sameer — Fri, 15 Aug 2008 04:05:35 +0000

Hi i am sameer, happy independence day to every budy. So waht we all are doing today not thinking abt over counntry. just when this independence day will come that time only we will think about india i am write na. but it’s not correct. wht we are doing to our country. just do it some thing for india.. ok this i have many thoughts in my mind but how to present i am not getting. ok byee. happy indepenence day once again.

By: Deepak kumar

Deepak kumar — Thu, 14 Aug 2008 11:24:02 +0000

quie marto ho dulahan a laya marana ha batan a liya
mar jayo ga hosan ke basti me to chanda na daya kafahan ka liya

By: Vikas Singh

Vikas Singh — Sat, 09 Aug 2008 06:36:56 +0000

Nice..Quotes..Well Thanks for Writing.

I;m also saying something…
Maar De Dhakka To tut Jaye Pakka,
Jawani Use Kahte Hain,
Mar Mite Jo Shahid-e-watan Ke liye,
Kurbaani Usse Kahte hain…….!!!!!
JAI HIND..!!!!!

By: N

Sat, 12 Jul 2008 15:09:19 +0000

Nice one, keep more subject oriented sense in your poetry and flow of words as well…

Waiting for some excellent work.

Regards
- N

By: ikshayar

ikshayar — Mon, 07 Jul 2008 11:32:03 +0000

Sure I can but now a days I am writing nothing new!

By: nandini

nandini — Sun, 06 Jul 2008 10:14:23 +0000

can u write some more poems on deshbhakti?????????

By: Riddhi Iyer

Riddhi Iyer — Fri, 13 Jun 2008 19:30:31 +0000

FANTASTIC poem and write more of them.